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See the Sea

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Toerag
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Ala bam a


0 posted 11-05-1999 11:09 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Toerag

All dressed in white,
It's head a'beam,
The lighthouse, you and me,
We all hold hands,
Our souls together,
Watching the rolling sea.
Looking out west,
Where sky and sea rhyme,
You and me, the moon mirrored night
White caps come in to rest,
Surveying the tides and times.
© Copyright 1999 Toerag - All Rights Reserved
WhtDove
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1 posted 11-05-1999 11:11 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Toe this was a calming peaceful piece! Nice!
Watcher666
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2 posted 11-05-1999 11:12 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Toerag...I love your funny side,but your serious side, well I'm just in awe.This is absolutely beautiful!

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3 posted 11-05-1999 11:15 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

How beautiful!!! I could hear the waves crashing... feel the salt spray!!! Thank you, Toe... this is absolutely lovely!
Martie
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4 posted 11-05-1999 11:17 AM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

You painted a beautiful picture with this one.
Marilyn
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5 posted 11-05-1999 11:19 AM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

You never fail to amaze me Sir Toe. Well done.
Pepper
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6 posted 11-05-1999 11:40 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Simply beautiful Toe!

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire!
Toerag
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7 posted 11-05-1999 03:01 PM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Thank you all.....
RainbowGirl
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8 posted 11-05-1999 03:11 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Toe: I'd sure like to be at one with the sea...

HUSG

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Toerag
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9 posted 11-05-1999 03:34 PM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Thank you brit...and all...have a great weekend to everyone......
Dark Angel
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10 posted 11-05-1999 04:03 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Really beautiful Toe, well Done

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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11 posted 11-05-1999 09:46 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Nice work, ole man river.
Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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12 posted 11-06-1999 01:31 AM       View Profile for Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Email Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rosemary J. Gwaltney's Home Page   View IP for Rosemary J. Gwaltney

Say, Toesie, this is a truly lovely poem! I felt that I was there too. You certainly are versatile! Thank you for sharing such beautiful visions and feelings.

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...Living is ever like crossing rivers; finding a new life on each shore ... RJG
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13 posted 11-06-1999 09:23 AM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Absolutely enchanting, dear Toerag



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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats

Denise
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Enchanting, indeed! Good job, Toe!

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Denise

 
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