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Dark Angel
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0 posted 11-05-1999 07:31 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Angel

WhtDove, I want to thank you for all the help you have given me in putting this poem together. Thank you Angel


I Miss You!


My tenderness, my love
Sent to me from above.
You are my special one
Shining like the sun

Bringing out my emotions
I drown within your oceans
I miss you everyday
How much I cannot say

I want to touch your heart
So tenderness won't part
You bring joy to my day
Please don't ever go away

Holding you in warm embrace
Caressing your Angelic face.
Your sweet lips I'll devour
Each second and each hour

Missing you more than you'll know
May our love forever grow.
Where you are I want to be
Only you it is I see.


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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


© Copyright 1999 Dark Angel - All Rights Reserved
Moonshine
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1 posted 11-05-1999 08:45 AM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

This is awesome DA. You write so beautifully.

Huggs,
Moonshine.
WhtDove
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2 posted 11-05-1999 10:43 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Your welcome D.A! Glad you decided on that one line. Turned out great! ;o)
Watcher666
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3 posted 11-05-1999 10:48 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Awwww so sweet...Liked this much!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Dark Angel
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4 posted 11-05-1999 04:28 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Moonshine, I thank you so very much for your lovely comments. ((((HUGS))))
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WhtDove, I've said it before and I'll say it again, you truly are an Angel ((((HUGS))))
Thank you so much!

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Dark Angel
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5 posted 11-05-1999 04:29 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Watcher, thank you so much

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Pepper
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6 posted 11-05-1999 04:59 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

This poem is simply beautiful DA and I really enjoyed the read.....infact I am saving this in my 'Best Poetry File'....

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire!
Isis
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7 posted 11-05-1999 06:10 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Simply beautiful DA.Good on ya mate!

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

Denise
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8 posted 11-05-1999 07:25 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Simply quite beautiful!

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Denise

Alwye
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9 posted 11-05-1999 09:05 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

What beauty...I can definitely relate. Exellent job!

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*Krista Knutson*

"To be great is to be misunderstood...." - Ralph Waldo Emerson

Dark Angel
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10 posted 11-06-1999 12:45 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Thank you all very much, but I did not do this on my own. Whtdve helped me complete it and without her it would not have been this beautiful. Thank You

Thanks again WhtDove

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


WhtDove
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11 posted 11-06-1999 12:53 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

D.A. thanks girl! You're welcome for the help you really are. It is beautiful!
They were your thoughts all I did was re-arrange the words!

[This message has been edited by WhtDove (edited 11-06-1999).]
passing shadows
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12 posted 04-25-2004 09:14 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

beautifully done
 
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