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Walking on Wind

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DramaMama
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Walking on Wind


Polishing the breeze
Hummingbirds wing
Hovering
At beak’s length
From beckoning blossom

Tiny blurs of bird rhythm
Bobbing and bowing
To the lure
Of tantalizing nectar

Nodding their colorful heads
Blooms acquiesce
To the gentle
Insistent whirring
Of hummingbirds
Walking on wind.

@ 1999 Pat Hornsby Crochet


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Mike
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Very nice. Enjoyed the vision you created.
Watcher666
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Good imagery....Nicely done!

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I liked this very much!
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I can see the hummingbirds through your words. Look ! There they are. Nicely done.

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DramaMama,
Enjoyed the read.
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I like this! Well done!
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A very lovely picture!

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imagery is great here
 
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