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DramaMama
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0 posted 1999-11-04 11:17 PM


The Rhyming Man

he lays down tracks
kicking up dust
like hot rods
dragging on a country road

his guitar twanging
gravelly voice caresses
the melody,
bending the rhyme
to fit the time

spinning dreams
tapping rhythms
on the back porch of the world
the rhyming man sits rockin’

@ 10-12-99 PHC




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1 posted 1999-11-04 11:40 PM


He's not the only thing rockin'....so are you, with this poem. Excellent.
Mike
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2 posted 1999-11-05 12:00 PM


Enjoyed...
Watcher666
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3 posted 1999-11-05 11:13 AM


Good one!

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4 posted 1999-11-05 01:04 PM


I like this very much!! Welcome!
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