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Kevin
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0 posted 11-04-1999 10:27 PM       View Profile for Kevin   Email Kevin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Kevin

you opened up your
heart opened up
and swalloed
you
whole world
starting at
me and my
troubles take you
down from this
place amongst the
stars fade
slowy dying
i have died
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1 posted 11-08-1999 03:05 PM       View Profile for desperado   Email desperado   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for desperado

interesting, yet it was too disjunctured to taje any real meaning out of this. keep at it. try to be creative with your works.
 
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