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Drinking wine and smelling flowers
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Drinking wine and smelling flowers |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Drinking wine and smelling flowers Grandpa drifts away from me, His head is down on his goatee. He once told me where he goes, When he's away and in full doze. Grandpas' nod he did explain, Are wishes from his other brain. Where fictions lie, stored in rest And called upon in dreamers' quest. It's a world unbound of rules, Emotional and crowned in jewels. Hope and longing grow like weed And sprout and reign from unseen seed. Sanctions are improbable And sin I'd say illogical. It's a warm and restful place And of hardship there is no trace. It's a place he does prefer, Today grows more and more a blur. This is why his nods increase, They are his favorite path to peace. He dines in many ivory towers, Drinking wine and smelling flowers. |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Yep...enjoyed. |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Wow.....simply beautiful.  ------------------ Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Wow Seymour, I just loved how you did this one. The 2nd stanza I just loved. Unique way to explain it! Great job! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Excellent Seymour. You are so good with those words. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mike, Thank you for the enjoy. Systematic, Enjoyed the comment of WOW. WhtDove, I liked the second stanza too. Thank you. Martie, Thank you so much for the read and comment. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
aaaaaaaahhhh...sounds like heaven to me! ------------------ Denise |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Liked this much.Very well done! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Lovely Sy.....a wonderful read..... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Sounds as though he'd found a lovely place to go. *G* Great job, Seymour! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Denise, Not heaven but close. Watcher, Thanks for the like. Pepper, Thanks for the wonderful. Suthern, It suits me, thanks for the great. |
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