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aaron sanchez
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0 posted 11-04-1999 05:28 PM       View Profile for aaron sanchez   Email aaron sanchez   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for aaron sanchez

what love can discord flow
that such things as life, love, and hate
be brought down so low?
wretched, oh cursed feeling
that causes empire's to fall
and king's to lose sanity.
in vengeance, complete our sorrow,
and wilt, o rose of mine heart,
to burn this love from out of my soul.
tainted! oh, how tainted!
cursed and blind am i
to not see it sooner,
that i love you, i love you.
what sort of actions derive
this meaning and affection?
effected infection of hateful lust;
affection derived from salted dust.
to dust i'll return,
dust that with evil burns,
burn for despised love,
despised hate and concerned pride.
burn me.
oh fire, touch my eyes
so that they may but see
and soak my heart in kerosene
so it but may be purified.
oh, villian! villian!
i call you villian!
evil before man!
angels and ministers of grace
have no intelligence in the matter!
only through faith,
through bloodshed,
can my soul be saved
from cursed fire
and wretched feeling.
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1 posted 11-04-1999 07:36 PM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

I really like this....I like the way it was written. Nice.

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2 posted 11-04-1999 10:28 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very beautiful!

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Watcher666
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3 posted 11-05-1999 11:19 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Enjoyed the read...Nicely done!

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4 posted 11-05-1999 01:48 PM       View Profile for aaron sanchez   Email aaron sanchez   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for aaron sanchez

thanx all for the encouragement

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