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You Don't Understand Me

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JOY 14
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since 09-22-1999
Posts 1447
Wisconsin USA


0 posted 11-04-1999 02:57 PM       View Profile for JOY 14   Email JOY 14   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit JOY 14's Home Page   View IP for JOY 14

You don't understand me
You don't have a clue
You think you know what I am all about
But as a human and myself I am here to prove you WRONG!

The things I do are not me
The things I say are not
Who I am
Who I be
If you tried to look inside
You'd know the true me

But alas you stop on the outside
And try not to look at the window within
Because if you tried
I'm sure you'd have to die
If I proved you wrong
If I truthed your lie

Now I'm looking at the mirror
And I wonder what all you people see
For no matter how hard you look at the outside
You will never, ever, shake the blindness to really see me
© Copyright 1999 Kristen Joy Jacobus - All Rights Reserved
Watcher666
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since 10-13-1999
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1 posted 11-04-1999 04:47 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Well done.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Lynn
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since 09-20-1999
Posts 321
Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.


2 posted 11-04-1999 05:02 PM       View Profile for Lynn   Email Lynn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lynn

Well done. I enjoyed this so much. The words spoke the truth about how I feel also.
Deep Blue Me
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since 11-04-1999
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By a big lake


3 posted 11-04-1999 05:29 PM       View Profile for Deep Blue Me   Email Deep Blue Me   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Deep Blue Me

The only beauty is in the soul. Have no fear, you are a masterpiece. I've glimpsed it between your lines.

Love your work,
Rock on,

DB

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When I'm sad she comes to me
With a thousand smiles, she gives to me free.
--------Hendrix
Deep Blue Me
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By a big lake


4 posted 11-04-1999 05:29 PM       View Profile for Deep Blue Me   Email Deep Blue Me   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Deep Blue Me

The only beauty is in the soul. Have no fear, you are a masterpiece. I've glimpsed it between your lines.

Love your work,
Rock on,

DB

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When I'm sad she comes to me
With a thousand smiles, she gives to me free.
--------Hendrix
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