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You Don't Understand Me
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You Don't Understand Me |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
You don't understand me You don't have a clue You think you know what I am all about But as a human and myself I am here to prove you WRONG! The things I do are not me The things I say are not Who I am Who I be If you tried to look inside You'd know the true me But alas you stop on the outside And try not to look at the window within Because if you tried I'm sure you'd have to die If I proved you wrong If I truthed your lie Now I'm looking at the mirror And I wonder what all you people see For no matter how hard you look at the outside You will never, ever, shake the blindness to really see me |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Well done. ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Lynn Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 316Jasper, Alabama U.S.A. |
Well done. I enjoyed this so much. The words spoke the truth about how I feel also. |
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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
The only beauty is in the soul. Have no fear, you are a masterpiece. I've glimpsed it between your lines. Love your work, Rock on, DB ------------------ When I'm sad she comes to me With a thousand smiles, she gives to me free. --------Hendrix |
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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
The only beauty is in the soul. Have no fear, you are a masterpiece. I've glimpsed it between your lines. Love your work, Rock on, DB ------------------ When I'm sad she comes to me With a thousand smiles, she gives to me free. --------Hendrix |
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