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fatwah
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0 posted 11-04-1999 11:17 AM       View Profile for fatwah   Email fatwah   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for fatwah

dead in the street
dying in heat
waiting for the sun
waiting for the gun
smile girl,
my world
hoping for release
hoping for some peace
screaming, crying
waiting, dying
dead on her feet
she is dead in the street
she's alive in my mind
but she's dead
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1 posted 11-04-1999 04:38 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Nicely done.

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2 posted 11-04-1999 05:21 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

So powerful, fatwah~I like the way this was written.

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But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

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ah thankyouverymuch
 
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