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Emptiness" Defined.

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ThUnDeRkYsS
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0 posted 11-04-1999 03:39 AM       View Profile for ThUnDeRkYsS   Email ThUnDeRkYsS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for ThUnDeRkYsS

My life consumed by hurt and pain
when will it all reform?
I'm happy and I know no vain
but yet this hurts me more

I know its gone, I want it still
please send someone for me
this hole in my heart, she would fill
someone to set me free

So much love I have to give
yet nobody wants to know
so much life I want to live
yet no-one for me to show

Why are people so scared of love?
I'll never understand
more beautiful than a snow white dove
how can such a thing be "damned"??

More magic it seems, than life itself
yet so many run away
so tragic for me, I'd give myself
seems no-one hears my plea

Truthful, honest, kind and pure
this is my love for taking
some-one to hold, to just be near
to stop me from this shaking

I want to love, I want to need
I want to know again
for something real, dear Lord I plead
my love would know no ends

This emptiness is getting old
I need to love again
the truth is open to unfold
just look inside my friend

I thought I knew what true love was
I guess I didnt see
why you ask? oh, just because
now no-one's here with me

My love was real, or so I think
I guess I'll never know
cause it was gone in just a blink
why? I will never know

Unless it goes both ways, no "stops"
its just a "thing" I feel
I'm sorry if I held no "blocks"
but to me it was quite real

I ache, I hurt, I long for more
I search, I try to find
cant buy this "need" in any store
my emptiness defined.

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Watcher666
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1 posted 11-04-1999 03:44 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Beautifully expressed....well done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Pepper
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since 08-19-99
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2 posted 11-04-1999 07:58 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Well Done Thunder! I can feel the longing in this piece.....

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Toerag
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3 posted 11-04-1999 08:12 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Nicely done Thunder....
ThUnDeRkYsS
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4 posted 11-04-1999 11:00 PM       View Profile for ThUnDeRkYsS   Email ThUnDeRkYsS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ThUnDeRkYsS

Watcher666.... Thank you, Watcher
Pepper........ Thanks to you... So can I LOL ... What can we do but WAIT??
Toerag........ Much thanks to you as well, greatly appreciate your comments.

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Life is what you make of it... Not what you let it be
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on the threshold of a dream


5 posted 11-05-1999 01:29 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Well done, Thunder... may your wait be a short one. *S*
passing shadows
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you are missed
 
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