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~dont exhale~ |
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Star Fairy 2 Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 260cerritos, california, usa |
i smile cuz i've ran out of tears i laugh cuz i've no voice to scream im brave cuz i've ran away from fears i'm genuine when i act out my scene i'd hug u to let you go i'd dream of u to live my reality i'd kiss u to hold on some more i'd die for u granting imortality i love so i dont die i pray so i dont fail i hope so i dont cry i wait so i dont exhale ------------------ Don't Fall.. Rise in Love -------823------- |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Nicely done! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
loved this one. really had a direction...much love |
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Lynn Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 316Jasper, Alabama U.S.A. |
Really enjoyed this one. Beautiful expression in all the words. ------------------ NOT IN VAIN If I can stop one heart from breaking I shall not live in vain; If I can ease one life from aching, Or cool one pain, Or help one fainting robin Into his nest again, I shall not live in vain. ~Emily Dickinson |
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Star Fairy 2 Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 260cerritos, california, usa |
thank you!! i really appreciate you taking the time to read this... a lot of this is what i'm feeling right now.. and i needed a vent.. so here it was.. thanx again.. ------------------ Don't Fall.. Rise in Love -------823------- |
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