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Star Fairy 2
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0 posted 11-04-1999 12:58 AM       View Profile for Star Fairy 2   Email Star Fairy 2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Star Fairy 2

i smile cuz i've ran out of tears
i laugh cuz i've no voice to scream
im brave cuz i've ran away from fears
i'm genuine when i act out my scene

i'd hug u to let you go
i'd dream of u to live my reality
i'd kiss u to hold on some more
i'd die for u granting imortality

i love so i dont die
i pray so i dont fail
i hope so i dont cry
i wait so i dont exhale

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Don't Fall.. Rise in Love
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© Copyright 1999 Rakhee - All Rights Reserved
Watcher666
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1 posted 11-04-1999 02:30 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Nicely done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
devina
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2 posted 11-04-1999 03:05 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

loved this one. really had a direction...much love
Lynn
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3 posted 11-04-1999 04:59 PM       View Profile for Lynn   Email Lynn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lynn


Really enjoyed this one. Beautiful expression in all the words.


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NOT IN VAIN
If I can stop one heart from breaking
I shall not live in vain;
If I can ease one life
from aching,
Or cool one pain,
Or help one fainting robin
Into his nest again,
I shall not live in vain.
~Emily Dickinson
Star Fairy 2
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4 posted 11-05-1999 12:12 AM       View Profile for Star Fairy 2   Email Star Fairy 2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Star Fairy 2

thank you!!
i really appreciate you taking the time to read this... a lot of this is what i'm feeling right now.. and i needed a vent.. so here it was.. thanx again..

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Don't Fall.. Rise in Love
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