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The Garden( or, happiness found in dreams)

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For_Never
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0 posted 11-03-1999 11:45 PM       View Profile for For_Never   Email For_Never   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for For_Never

In the garden she stood,
flowing with the light breeze.
So accepting of the gentle tugging,
one has to wonder..
who is tugging who..
never does she break
only accepts what she must
to grow,
to be..

She lives..She loves..She is..
What beauty could she not possess?
Swaying gently..dancing upon the breeze
She is all I see in that Garden,
though other are there I am sure..
but for them i care not

No, it is alone that intraps my heart..
I want to drink of the nectar of thoughs lips
and lightly touch that great spirit
to dance but a moment with the song of her soul
and spent but a lifetime within those eyes

I am transfixed inside her..
though far away I am..
and why she chose me,
I know not...
-and how this magick spell was casted upon..
I care not..
I am captured..
and I submit..
I am hers..
in this Garden..


-Edward A. Beerman
8-27-97



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For a fateful night of passion, since my heart need one last vent, I believe I am willing to pay that black widows rent...
© Copyright 1999 Edward A. Beerman - All Rights Reserved
Isis
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1 posted 11-04-1999 12:25 AM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Beautiful

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

Watcher666
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2 posted 11-04-1999 02:32 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Lovely!!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Pepper
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3 posted 11-04-1999 10:04 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Enjoyed this much Edward....

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire!
Toerag
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4 posted 11-04-1999 10:16 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Nice job Edward.....
Martie
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5 posted 11-04-1999 01:36 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Yes, well done.
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6 posted 11-05-1999 02:26 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

I enjoyed!
WhtDove
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nice job!
Alwye
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8 posted 11-05-1999 11:15 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Very very beautiful....this is a truly lovely piece.

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*Krista Knutson*

"To be great is to be misunderstood...." - Ralph Waldo Emerson

 
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