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in love with one who loves another

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Kevin
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0 posted 11-03-1999 10:16 PM       View Profile for Kevin   Email Kevin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Kevin

cheated by my own emotions,
certain your the only one,
drowning in your endless oceans,
waves of remorse flood my sun.
perfect every moment shared,
but moments you donít want with me,
when I told you that I cared,
you told me we could never be.
I know that you do love another,
my feelings still I can't deny,
compare myself to the favored other,
wonder why he caught your eye.
choking on my self brought sorrow,
I gasp for air you suffocate me,
my only hope lies in tomorrow,
to shine some light you did not see.
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1 posted 11-03-1999 10:34 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very sad and heartbreaking. Don't spend too much time waiting...you might not see the one meant for you!

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Excellent...love the lines
"choking on my self brought sorrow,
I gasp for air you suffocate me,"

devina
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3 posted 11-04-1999 03:12 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

i can completely understand your position here. i am in a similiar one myself. i just ended a four year relationship and the one that i want, well he still needs his ex, so in other words i feel your pain, hope everything rights itself in the end for you...much love
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