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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 11-03-1999 08:50 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin

I think

Here I lie within my bed,
Phrases flying through my head.
Half in wake and half in dream,
Siphoning my dreamers stream,
Desperate to stay their shed.

Some are plain and some are mean
And some like angels seem.
But I cannot judge them all
And some I cannot recall,
My best is but half a gleam.

I try to stay, hold at bay,
The awaking of day.
I need but a little more,
To fulfill the need of store.
But it seems they will not stay.

I think that I must leave this mode,
For if I don't, I will explode.
© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 11-03-1999 08:55 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Excellent, Seymour! I enjoyed this muchly!

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Denise

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Looks like we're on the same wavelength tonight. Sweet dreams.
Martie
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I always enjoy your poetry. The words whirl in my head at night too. I wish you technocolor dreams to write about in the morning or many fond remembrances of things past.
hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 11-03-1999 09:41 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Nicely done Seymore, but I expect nothing else when I open one of your poems

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Alis volat propriis
Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 11-03-1999 11:58 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Denise,
Muchly that's good thank you so much Denise.
Sunshine,
Enjoyed your comment, thank you.
Martie,
Technocolor dreams, that would be nice, thanks.
Hoot,
It's always nice to read one of your comments
thank you.
Watcher666
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Enjoyed this much!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 11-04-1999 09:59 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Watcher,
Thank you for the enjoy.
WhtDove
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Boy Seymour can I relate to this one! I go to bed and find myself trying to ryhme my prayers. heeh good one!
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9 posted 11-05-1999 01:25 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

I keep a notebook by my bed
For words that whirl 'round in my head
As I try to drift off to sleep.
(A great rhyme lost can make one weep!)
And the pages don't stay white
For if I get up in the night
That spiral's bound to pierce my foot...
No words, just bloodstains, in that book!

Great job, Seymour!
Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 11-05-1999 05:26 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

WhtDove,
I see I am not alone in poetic actions.
Suthern,
I can relate to that, I often go into the kitchen and open the micro wave for that little light. I don't want to wake anyone.
 
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