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For this no pity I have... |
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For_Never Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 125Cincinnati, oh, United States of America |
Who is this martyr who hung from the tree.. who is man who says he died for me.. who is that Father who forsoke his son just for me..and other ones.. What was his thoughts upon the shaft.. was of betrayal, or fishs layed in stacks Why does the friends of one so good and pure.. let this lamb cure? And a voice shook the Earth, or so that story goes.. a cry of anger? or a laugh at a joke.. what a mote we must be in the silent ones eyes.. discarding his will for rose colored lies let me repost I thought I just had Did he die for heaven attained? What was his sacrifice in our name? What was that fall that was so hard took? he fell ten feet down, and to heaven he took. Maybe he was tired of the swine in his flock envied our passion that he couldn't share.. and only had his father who truly cared.. What a failure we were to that stagnent one a race besot in insanity, who slaughtered his son and to that God who lovingly creates, to so wrathfully destory.. Who fostered the lion, to feast on the lamb.. the ultimate wisdom, he who glorifies our ignorance, and disdains the fruit of are fall That teacher of all... My father, my lord, we have only just begun... Edward A. Beerman 11-03-99 |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Edward, I enjoyed this piece very much. Very interesting analogy and makes one ponder. I especially like the last line;it's very profound. Thank you for sharing....... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire! [This message has been edited by Pepper (edited 11-03-1999).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I like the insight of this...thank you for posting...and Welcome to Passions. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Nice  ------------------ Alis volat propriis |
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For_Never Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 125Cincinnati, oh, United States of America |
Thank you, Pepper,Sunshine, and Hoot_owl_n, but it was just a moment in my stray thoughts, though, one to I often return.. EAB ------------------ For a fateful night of passion, since my heart need one last vent, I believe I am willing to pay that black widows rent... |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Great thoughts my friend ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Well done! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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