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Kevin
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0 posted 11-03-1999 08:41 PM       View Profile for Kevin   Email Kevin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Kevin

Heavy are my eyelids,
Heavy is my heart,
Heavy are the secrets that rip my soul apart.

Seldom do I see you,
Seldom do I smile,
Seldom are the moments we together made worthwhile.

Precious is your beauty,
Precious is your mind,
Precious are the memories your wake has left behind.

Hopeful is my spirit,
Hopeful I remain,
Hopeful after tonight we will never be the same.
© Copyright 1999 Kevin Bednarz - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 11-03-1999 09:00 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is absolutely beautiful, Kevin and very touching!

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hoot_owl_rn
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Kevin, I really like the format you chose for this one, nicely done

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Systematic Decay
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3 posted 11-03-1999 09:49 PM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

This really is beautiful...

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.


Jennifer Marie O'Neil
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4 posted 11-03-1999 10:08 PM       View Profile for Jennifer Marie O'Neil   Email Jennifer Marie O'Neil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jennifer Marie O'Neil

what a perfect poem - i read it quite a few times and just love it
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beautiful!
 
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