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Contageous tears |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa 
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im sorry this cant be better, but i struggled to put it together in memory of mike hascheck, a boy who died this past year at my school from a disease he fought all his life: The autumn wind bit down me with an unfamiliar sting and as I stood in silence my ears began to ring. we gathered ‘round in memory for one who passed away and sadly knowing not of him I had little to say. Our paths had crossed once or twice we shared a common glance yet to sit down and talk to him I never had the chance. So as I stand in solitude surrounded by his closest few why am I so touched by the loss of this boy I never knew. Maybe trough his mothers tears I see into his heart or is it his brothers humble eyes that sets his soul apart. The instant that my feelings changed Ill probably never know but standing here beside his grave my tears I must let go. |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
getting rid of that zero again =) it bothers me so much |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Very moving Kevin.This piece touched me. ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire! |
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U K Hero Member
since 1999-08-08
Posts 266England |
You speak of the heart, so dont be sorry this is fine and I enjoyed reading it. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Kevin, this is oh so touching, it brought a tear to my eyes |
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Dolphins3 Member
since 1999-09-30
Posts 135Wisconsin |
Very beautiful poem Mike. =) |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very touching, Kevin. It brought tears to my eyes too. ------------------ Denise |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
mike? thanks i think =) |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Welcome to Passions, Kevin - Nice to have another New Englander among us...  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I would like to think this to be a true piece, and in the loss of one life, another life began a new spurt of growth and is learning to see compassion in a new light. Welcome to Passions, I hope to see more of this type of fine work from you again. [You may want to run a spell check and grammar check now and then, your work would read much smoother.] |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
This is so touching...I'm moved by the emotion present here..welcome and keep up the exellent work.  ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "To be great is to be misunderstood...." - Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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