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Knowing (reply to my own challenge)

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Echo Rhayne
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0 posted 11-03-1999 05:45 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Echo Rhayne

In a hollow wind the pages turn
before stone eyes that seek to learn
looking through a hidden door
I know this well, I've been here before

Stepping lightly on ocean washed sand
reaching infinitely for an angels hand
standing quietly on an empty shore
I know this well, I've been here before

Lost in a forest with no trees
a solitude beneath invisible leaves
staring blindly at the forest floor
I know this well, I've been here before

In a sacred room burns the desire
burning out of control, burning like wildfire
feeling the heart, hearing the roar
I know this well, I've been here before


Floating in a salty green sea
feeling the waves wash over me
covering me in all I adore
I know this well, I've been here before

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~*~ Time erases and rewrites all the lines. What remains is the poetry! ~*~



[This message has been edited by Echo Rhayne (edited 11-04-1999).]
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Isis
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1 posted 11-03-1999 05:56 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

So beautiful Echo.. I loved this

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

Lynn
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2 posted 11-03-1999 05:59 PM       View Profile for Lynn   Email Lynn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lynn


Beautiful Echo...."I know this well, I've been here before"...Words that come to mind quite often.

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NOT IN VAIN
If I can stop one heart from breaking
I shall not live in vain;
If I can ease one life
from aching,
Or cool one pain,
Or help one fainting robin
Into his nest again,
I shall not live in vain.
~Emily Dickinson
Echo Rhayne
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3 posted 11-04-1999 01:13 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Isis...Thank you, glad you liked it!

Lynn...Thank you Lynn, yes, you are right, they do come to mind quite often, at least to mine! Thank you for reading!

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~*~ Time erases and rewrites all the lines. What remains is the poetry! ~*~

Watcher666
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4 posted 11-04-1999 01:28 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Lovely...enjoyed this much!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
WhtDove
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5 posted 11-05-1999 11:44 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Echo this was wonderful! I just love your poems! So much thought in them. GREAT ONE sweetie!
Julie
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6 posted 11-05-1999 11:49 PM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julie

Excellent Echo! Loved this much.
Echo Rhayne
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7 posted 11-06-1999 02:39 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Thanks everyone...see you in a week!


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~*~ Time erases and rewrites all the lines. What remains is the poetry! ~*~

Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 11-06-1999 08:17 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Echo,
Just want to echo the above, enjoyed the read.
caroline
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9 posted 11-06-1999 08:55 AM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Lovely, Echo...you are truly talented. I enjoy your work very much

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats

passing shadows
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10 posted 04-18-2004 10:08 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

flows nicely... and beautiful theme
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