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Knowing (reply to my own challenge) |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA 
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In a hollow wind the pages turn before stone eyes that seek to learn looking through a hidden door I know this well, I've been here before Stepping lightly on ocean washed sand reaching infinitely for an angels hand standing quietly on an empty shore I know this well, I've been here before Lost in a forest with no trees a solitude beneath invisible leaves staring blindly at the forest floor I know this well, I've been here before In a sacred room burns the desire burning out of control, burning like wildfire feeling the heart, hearing the roar I know this well, I've been here before Floating in a salty green sea feeling the waves wash over me covering me in all I adore I know this well, I've been here before ------------------ ~*~ Time erases and rewrites all the lines. What remains is the poetry! ~*~ [This message has been edited by Echo Rhayne (edited 11-04-1999).] |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
So beautiful Echo.. I loved this  ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Lynn Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 316Jasper, Alabama U.S.A. |
Beautiful Echo...."I know this well, I've been here before"...Words that come to mind quite often. ------------------ NOT IN VAIN If I can stop one heart from breaking I shall not live in vain; If I can ease one life from aching, Or cool one pain, Or help one fainting robin Into his nest again, I shall not live in vain. ~Emily Dickinson |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Isis...Thank you, glad you liked it! Lynn...Thank you Lynn, yes, you are right, they do come to mind quite often, at least to mine! Thank you for reading! ------------------ ~*~ Time erases and rewrites all the lines. What remains is the poetry! ~*~ |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Lovely...enjoyed this much! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Echo this was wonderful! I just love your poems! So much thought in them. GREAT ONE sweetie! |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
Excellent Echo! Loved this much. |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Thanks everyone...see you in a week! ------------------ ~*~ Time erases and rewrites all the lines. What remains is the poetry! ~*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Echo, Just want to echo the above, enjoyed the read. |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Lovely, Echo...you are truly talented. I enjoy your work very much ------------------ "Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
flows nicely... and beautiful theme |
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