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amber
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los banos, ca,


0 posted 11-03-1999 05:43 PM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for amber

what should i feel?
right now at this moment?
yes we made love tonight,
but my heart would never know it.

maybe its because,
it doesnt make everything alright,
as much as i would like it to,
im still left wondering tonight.

about where all the magic went,
and all the warmth in your touch,
i remember all the innocence,
and realize its missed so much.

of all the softest kisses,
that stole my heart away,
and every single i love you,
that i can still feel to this day.

of all the simple times,
that are taken for granted now,
i know your still in love with me,
only its different somehow.

because im still at the point,
where i want to hold you near,
but you no longer need to hold me,
to know my love is sincere.
© Copyright 1999 amber jean white - All Rights Reserved
Isis
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1 posted 11-03-1999 05:46 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

So sad Amber In a way you feel very alone I know. (HUGS) friend.

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

Lynn
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Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.


2 posted 11-03-1999 05:51 PM       View Profile for Lynn   Email Lynn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lynn


Amber...I just wanted to let you know that I enjoy reading every thing that you write and it all touches my heart in some way.....This is a beautiful piece....(HUGS)

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"I Believe we are divine by nature." -Jewel

Grace is the refinement of a soul over time. -Jewel

[This message has been edited by Lynn (edited 11-03-1999).]
Denise
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3 posted 11-03-1999 10:05 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Sad, yet beautiful. Very well done.

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Denise

Watcher666
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since 10-13-1999
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4 posted 11-04-1999 03:35 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

So sad Hauntingly beautiful.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
amber
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5 posted 11-04-1999 04:22 PM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amber

thank you all very much for your comments. and lynn i am so glad that you enjoy the poems i have posted here in forums. they aare peices of my soul and im glad that its is understood by so many here. i appreciate it greatly. thank you agian.
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6 posted 11-04-1999 04:24 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Well done, amber!
 
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