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aaron sanchez
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0 posted 11-03-1999 05:35 PM       View Profile for aaron sanchez   Email aaron sanchez   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for aaron sanchez

I want you.
To say I love you
Is to me unsatisfactory
For I can not begin to reiterate
What I truly feel inside.
All I want is to hold you,
To kiss you with my peasant lips
Upon your regal forehead
And to but carress the strands
Of gold and honey
That pour out from your crown.
To drink the wine
That trickles from your lips
And drives me so far into your soul
And into madness
That I can't contain my love.
I am drawn to you
Like a deer to water,
Like an eagle to the air.
To behold the daisies
That from your feet bloom
Or the dandelions
That from your eyelashes sprout.
Fulfill.
All I can do is attempt
To fulfill you with my love,
A love I've held for so long.
This world is suffocating,
This love is overtaking.
I'm suffocating from this feeling,
This desire, this random nothing
Of pineapple's tart acid
And orange's sweet life blood.
Let me but drink of your happiness,
Of your eyes, lips, and soul,
And hold steadfast what I know to be true.
I love you, I love you.
I can not say it any other way.
I love you.
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Isis
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1 posted 11-03-1999 05:48 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

So beautiful (SIGH) How could she resist?

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

Lynn
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since 09-20-1999
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2 posted 11-03-1999 06:09 PM       View Profile for Lynn   Email Lynn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lynn


I have to agree with Isis. So beautiful, and I know I wouldn't be able to resist. (HUGS)
Iloveit
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3 posted 11-03-1999 06:24 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

no kidding, this is beautiful, wow!
aaron sanchez
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4 posted 11-03-1999 06:28 PM       View Profile for aaron sanchez   Email aaron sanchez   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for aaron sanchez

thanx all. i really appreciate it.
Watcher666
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5 posted 11-04-1999 09:46 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Beautiful...well done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
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