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devina
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since 1999-10-28
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Cali

0 posted 1999-11-03 05:01 PM


MY HEART GROWS SO WEARY,
AS THE HOURS STRETCH TO DAYS.
I RELIVE EACH PROMISE,
UNFULFILLED, YET STILL YOU MADE.

MY HEART GROWS STRONGER,
WITH THE PASSING OF TIME.
I RELIVE ALL THE GOOD YEARS,
WHEN PROUDLY, YOU WERE MINE.

MY HEART GROWS SO VERY TENDER,
WITH REMEMBRANCE OF YOUR TOUCH.
YOU BRANDED ME WITH YOUR FIRE,
EVERY TIME THAT WE MADE LOVE.

MY HEART STILL GROWS SOMBER,
WHEN REMINDED OF HOW YOU CHANGED.
FROM THE MAN I FELL IN LOVE WITH,
TO THE ONE WHO PLAYED SUCH GAMES.

MY HEART,
WITH YOU, REGARDLESS,
ALWAYS WILL REMAIN.

© Copyright 1999 Tanya Nicole Bustamante - All Rights Reserved
Echo Rhayne
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since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA
1 posted 1999-11-03 05:16 PM


I like this much. Very beautiful, yet sorrowful. I could feel the passion and hurt in this poem. Very well done! Two thumbs up


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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 1999-11-03 05:40 PM


With this one you mirrored my heart and soul. Loved it

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


devina
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since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539
Cali
3 posted 1999-11-03 06:09 PM


isis- i think i had us both in mind while writing this one. unfortunantly the hurt is never enough for me to move on, instead i stay trapped by his love and the years we have spent together. thank you echo for your comments, each and every one means alot!
Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

4 posted 1999-11-04 09:49 AM


Hauntingly beautiful.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
5 posted 2004-04-25 09:26 PM


nice ending
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