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My Heart

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devina
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since 10-28-1999
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0 posted 11-03-1999 05:01 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for devina

MY HEART GROWS SO WEARY,
AS THE HOURS STRETCH TO DAYS.
I RELIVE EACH PROMISE,
UNFULFILLED, YET STILL YOU MADE.

MY HEART GROWS STRONGER,
WITH THE PASSING OF TIME.
I RELIVE ALL THE GOOD YEARS,
WHEN PROUDLY, YOU WERE MINE.

MY HEART GROWS SO VERY TENDER,
WITH REMEMBRANCE OF YOUR TOUCH.
YOU BRANDED ME WITH YOUR FIRE,
EVERY TIME THAT WE MADE LOVE.

MY HEART STILL GROWS SOMBER,
WHEN REMINDED OF HOW YOU CHANGED.
FROM THE MAN I FELL IN LOVE WITH,
TO THE ONE WHO PLAYED SUCH GAMES.

MY HEART,
WITH YOU, REGARDLESS,
ALWAYS WILL REMAIN.
© Copyright 1999 Tanya Nicole Bustamante - All Rights Reserved
Echo Rhayne
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1 posted 11-03-1999 05:16 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

I like this much. Very beautiful, yet sorrowful. I could feel the passion and hurt in this poem. Very well done! Two thumbs up


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Isis
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2 posted 11-03-1999 05:40 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

With this one you mirrored my heart and soul. Loved it

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

devina
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3 posted 11-03-1999 06:09 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

isis- i think i had us both in mind while writing this one. unfortunantly the hurt is never enough for me to move on, instead i stay trapped by his love and the years we have spent together. thank you echo for your comments, each and every one means alot!
Watcher666
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since 10-13-1999
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4 posted 11-04-1999 09:49 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Hauntingly beautiful.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
passing shadows
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5 posted 04-25-2004 09:26 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

nice ending
 
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