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miriam Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 323glendale,ca. |
I thought of my future, I saw you in it. Where did all the people I love go? No one left but you and me. My siblings all moved on, My friends are gone as well. Just when I saw no on left, I turned around and there you were. You let me cry on your shoulder, My tears I can't control. And as I calm down again, You take my hand and lead me, to the path of the future. You and me are one again. ------------------ miriam coronado |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Glad someone is there for you Miriam  ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Miriam...I am so glad to see you back! I read your comment on my poem, and I'm not sure what it was you were trying to say...I hope I didn't take it wrong....please e-mail me if you want...I am going out of town in the morning though, so if I don't reply right away, know that I will ASAP....So glad to see you here again, and yes, this place can seem just a soap opera at times....many folks here with many emotions to share.....wish it wasn't, but there are friends here for you nonetheless.....Chin up !! ------------------ ~~ Lift your head high - spread your "words" and fly - - poetFemmeFatale |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome back, Miriam. Very nice poem! ------------------ Denise |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Nicely done,enjoyed the read. ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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miriam Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 323glendale,ca. |
I'm glad to hear you guys enjoyed it! there's a lot of new names I don't recognize, just wanted to give my personal welcome...so...welcome! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Welcome back! There are a lot of new "faces" aren't there! Lots more poems to read to. Glad you've returned. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Miriam!!! Welcome back hon Glad to see you among us. I really enjoyed the poem very nice ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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miriam Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 323glendale,ca. |
I am so sorry It took forever for me to reply. Turns out my computer at home broke down and I have to wait til I get to school. Thanks you guys for such a warm welcome...I had forgotten what a little kindness can do to a tender heart. thanks. ------------------ miriam coronado |
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