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miriam
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since 08-26-99
Posts 334
glendale,ca.


0 posted 11-03-1999 02:49 PM       View Profile for miriam   Email miriam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for miriam

I thought of my future,
I saw you in it.
Where did all the people I love go?
No one left but you and me.

My siblings all moved on,
My friends are gone as well.
Just when I saw no on left,
I turned around and there you were.

You let me cry on your shoulder,
My tears I can't control.
And as I calm down again,
You take my hand and lead me,
to the path of the future.
You and me are one again.

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miriam coronado


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Isis
Member Ascendant
since 09-06-99
Posts 6390
Sunny Queensland


1 posted 11-03-1999 06:12 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Glad someone is there for you Miriam

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

poetFemmeFatale
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since 07-25-99
Posts 2961
Arkansas


2 posted 11-03-1999 07:38 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Miriam...I am so glad to see you back! I read your comment on my poem, and I'm not sure what it was you were trying to say...I hope I didn't take it wrong....please e-mail me if you want...I am going out of town in the morning though, so if I don't reply right away, know that I will ASAP....So glad to see you here again, and yes, this place can seem just a soap opera at times....many folks here with many emotions to share.....wish it wasn't, but there are friends here for you nonetheless.....Chin up !!

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~~ Lift your head high - spread your "words" and fly - - poetFemmeFatale

Denise
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since 08-22-99
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3 posted 11-03-1999 08:13 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Welcome back, Miriam. Very nice poem!

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Denise

Watcher666
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since 10-13-1999
Posts 1630


4 posted 11-04-1999 09:41 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Nicely done,enjoyed the read.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
miriam
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since 08-26-99
Posts 334
glendale,ca.


5 posted 11-04-1999 01:34 PM       View Profile for miriam   Email miriam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for miriam

I'm glad to hear you guys enjoyed it! there's a lot of new names I don't recognize, just wanted to give my personal welcome...so...welcome!
WhtDove
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since 07-22-99
Posts 9561
Illinois


6 posted 11-05-1999 11:38 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Welcome back! There are a lot of new "faces" aren't there! Lots more poems to read to. Glad you've returned.
Dark Angel
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since 08-04-99
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7 posted 11-06-1999 01:03 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Miriam!!! Welcome back hon Glad to see you among us. I really enjoyed the poem very nice

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


miriam
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since 08-26-99
Posts 334
glendale,ca.


8 posted 11-11-1999 02:36 PM       View Profile for miriam   Email miriam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for miriam

I am so sorry It took forever for me to reply. Turns out my computer at home broke down and I have to wait til I get to school. Thanks you guys for such a warm welcome...I had forgotten what a little kindness can do to a tender heart. thanks.

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miriam coronado


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