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Dolphins3
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0 posted 11-03-1999 02:42 PM       View Profile for Dolphins3   Email Dolphins3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dolphins3

Leaving my side
I have no place to hide
Left naked and alone
Cold to the bone
Hurting so bad
Always feeling sad

This is what you did to me
What do you want?
Me to beg and plea
Sorry but I have my diginity.

It may be the only thing left
Without it I would be sent a drift
So I cling to it with all my might
Holding on ever so tight.

Knowing that someday
Everthing will be alright
Because I held on tight.

© Copyright 1999 Cheryl Beth - All Rights Reserved
Judas
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1 posted 11-03-1999 04:29 PM       View Profile for Judas   Email Judas   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Judas

Excellent work. I wish I shared your strength.
Dolphins3
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2 posted 11-03-1999 05:23 PM       View Profile for Dolphins3   Email Dolphins3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dolphins3

Judas Thank you. I'm sure you have as much strength as I do. We tend to find it when we need it .
Isis
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3 posted 11-03-1999 05:32 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Excellent piece Glad you can fight back too..

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

Lynn
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4 posted 11-03-1999 06:25 PM       View Profile for Lynn   Email Lynn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lynn


LOVELY PIECE....May you alwyas have the strength to hold yourself up as you begin to fall.

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NOT IN VAIN
If I can stop one heart from breaking
I shall not live in vain;
If I can ease one life
from aching,
Or cool one pain,
Or help one fainting robin
Into his nest again,
I shall not live in vain.
~Emily Dickinson

[This message has been edited by Lynn (edited 11-03-1999).]
Dolphins3
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5 posted 11-03-1999 07:50 PM       View Profile for Dolphins3   Email Dolphins3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dolphins3

Thank you Isis & Lynn . I'm glad you liked the poem.
Denise
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6 posted 11-03-1999 08:11 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Great poem, great attitude!

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Denise

Dolphins3
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7 posted 11-03-1999 08:13 PM       View Profile for Dolphins3   Email Dolphins3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dolphins3

Thank You Denise =)
Watcher666
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8 posted 11-04-1999 09:43 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Well done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
passing shadows
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9 posted 04-25-2004 05:08 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

very strong write
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