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fazewon
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since 1999-09-28
Posts 8
Houston, Tx, USA

0 posted 1999-11-03 01:58 PM


nothing to fear
cried my last tears
this state of depression
seperates me from my peers
battling my mental forcing me to see clear
forcing my way through murky waters of my past
stop and ponder on the happy times why didn't they last
but I must move on find my way to a new dawn
a better tomorrow in the past I'll leave all this sorrow
until I reach full circle again back to the times when all this began
same emotions, same feelings but different settings
during the happy times I wonder why I let them get to me
during the others I wonder what I'm missing or not getting
or is it I'm just letting life get to me
instead of learning from my mistakes
I'm reliving my mistakes
my world feels like it's spinning at an unbelievable rate

fzwn


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Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

1 posted 1999-11-04 09:51 AM


Your feelings are well expressed.Nicely done.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

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