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Sonnets to a Rose... continued

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Mike
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0 posted 11-03-1999 12:47 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Mike

Fair Rose, thou beauty comes in still of night,
And touches on mine heart as gentle breeze,
Unto mine soul, thou beauteous charms requite,
As thou doth calm within my raging seas,
Thou art lustre of midsummer's moon,
Sweet welkin charms that rise as day doth sleep,
With thoughts of scented bloom, I e'er shall swoon,
For in mine heart, fore'er thy love shall keep.
From passion's cup, of thee I do imbibe,
Thy nectar sweet, mine yearning deep doth sate,
Thou lover's quill, doth on mine heart inscribe,
Eternal love, as for the night I wait,
Fair Rose, I sing unto the god's above,
For Luna's light, hath brought immortal love.
© Copyright 1999 Mike - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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1 posted 11-03-1999 01:11 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Oh Yeah.... This works for me...
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2 posted 11-03-1999 02:15 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Move over Nan, no Kidding, Mike, this is wonderful.
Pepper
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3 posted 11-03-1999 02:30 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Simply beautiful Mike......

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Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 11-03-1999 06:51 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Mike,
Well you got some nice responses. I'm not much for old english but i Liked this.
Denise
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5 posted 11-03-1999 08:30 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Yes, yes, yes! You've done it again! Marvelous!

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hoot_owl_rn
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6 posted 11-03-1999 09:59 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Beautiful......I guess I need to start writing mine

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Mike
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7 posted 11-03-1999 10:48 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Thank ye all...
Mr. Tabin, really appreciated your comment. I realize that this form isnt everyones cup of tea... but I am glad you saw the effort and enjoyed.
Watcher666
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8 posted 11-04-1999 03:10 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Absolutely Lovely!

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Mike
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9 posted 11-04-1999 11:27 AM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Thank ya kindly Watcher.
Martie
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10 posted 11-04-1999 01:33 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Wow! Very well done.
Mike
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11 posted 11-06-1999 10:10 AM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Glad you liked the poem Martie... thanks for the comment.
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12 posted 11-06-1999 10:16 AM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

exquisite!! It likes me much, it does...

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13 posted 11-07-1999 04:17 AM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Ah Mike, this is beautiful ! : )
 
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