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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 11-03-1999 12:17 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Gone

Rusted metal and broken mast,
Resting within the tidal run.
The ocean washing, rushing past,
Her death affected everyone.

She was called the Honey Bee
And I mourned her death and downfall.
Died upon an ugly sea.
Downed by an unexpected squall.

From my own hands she was born,
Watched her sail, wind and swell.
Sailed me through night and dawn and
Through many a wind from hell.

We sailed oceans' green and blue,
My lovely genie of the sea.
Places that we never knew,
My ship my love, the Honey Bee.

Nor did she ever disobey,
I simply loved her from the start.
And proudly did she move in spray,
A picture to a sailors heart.

I have but one more sail to set,
For me to slip into the sea.
And toast my very last sunset,
Aboard the ghost of Honey Bee.
© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Mike
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1 posted 11-03-1999 12:53 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Well done... Enjoyed.
Sunshine
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2 posted 11-03-1999 01:40 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

And your second will be Honey Dew?

Good read, Sy!
Nan
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3 posted 11-03-1999 02:37 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

This goes on my Favorites by Sy list.....
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4 posted 11-03-1999 02:38 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Great job, Seymour!!!
Martie
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5 posted 11-03-1999 02:45 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

This gave me chills Seymour. You built a worthy poem that will outlast the raging sea.
Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 11-03-1999 07:14 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Mike,
Thank you for the well done.
Sunshine,
Not my first, two different loves. *L*
Nan,
And this goes on my favorites by Nan *L*
Suthern,
great is good enough for me, thank you. *L*
Martie,
Out last the raging sea, I doubt it but thanks.
U K Hero
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7 posted 11-03-1999 07:20 PM       View Profile for U K Hero   Email U K Hero   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for U K Hero

Your writing always brings a joy to my heart… BRAVO
Pepper
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8 posted 11-03-1999 07:24 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

An excellent work Sy.Great imagery.....

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Denise
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9 posted 11-03-1999 08:34 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This made me feel sad for you, Seymour. Very touching piece.

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10 posted 11-03-1999 09:58 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Excellent Seymore, this was very descriptive and so touching, thanks for the read
Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 11-04-1999 12:05 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

U K Hero,
Thanks so much for the bravo.
Pepper,
Thanks for the great. When are you going to post again?
Denice,
Thanks for the touching.
Hoot,
Excellent, that's about as good as it gets thank you so much.
Watcher666
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12 posted 11-04-1999 02:34 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Loved this! Awesome work here!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 11-04-1999 05:47 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Watcher,
Thanks for the awesome.
WhtDove
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14 posted 11-04-1999 09:08 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Seymour another wonderful description you make. It sounds like something I wouldn't mind doing! I love the water too. Love to fish...it's just so peaceful!
Seymour Tabin
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15 posted 11-04-1999 10:06 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

WhtDove,
Yes I am a water person, thank you for the comments.
Toerag
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16 posted 11-05-1999 03:29 PM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Great!
Dark Angel
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17 posted 11-05-1999 04:05 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

WOW!! Seymour, really loved this, beautiful !

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Seymour Tabin
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18 posted 11-05-1999 05:19 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Toe,
Thank you for the great.
And Dark Angel,Thank you for the WOW.
 
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