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Gotta Have My Six Pack

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Lucie
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0 posted 11-03-1999 09:31 AM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lucie

I canít express my feelings. My stomach tightened at the sight.
Memories flashed into my mind of long forgotten nights.
Iíve sat here across this table every weekend now for years.
Have told you that I love you with countless smiles and tears.

This weekend visit differed then the others times before.
I couldnít stand the distance of this table anymore.
I quickly moved beside you the closest we have been.
To any kind of encounter since I canít remember when.

I felt my pulse quicken I couldnít seem to breathe.
Felt the warmth of closeness your hand upon my knee.
Then you raised you shirt up I saw a flash of skin.
You saw my cheeks darken and gave your crooked grin.

Iíve always loved that six pack havenít seen it in a while.
Even now I canít forget it as I sit here alone and smile.
People do not understand why I would sit and wait.
For a man who sits in prison behind an iron gate.

I often ask that question sometimes I just donít know.
Until I feel you hold me close when its time for me to go.
I can tell the world right now if I have to wait another year.
They wonít find me home on Sundays, baby Ö Iíll be here.
© Copyright 1999 Lucille Dobbins - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 11-03-1999 09:44 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

When you truly love someone, no wait is too long. *S*

Wonderful poem, Lucie... even if I did think Fosters when I saw the title! LOL.
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2 posted 11-03-1999 11:29 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Enkoyed the read....well done!

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Nan
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3 posted 11-03-1999 01:50 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Lucie - A love worth having - is worth waiting for.....
Iloveit
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4 posted 11-03-1999 02:17 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

wow, this is beautiful lucie
devina
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5 posted 11-03-1999 02:26 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

just remember that love will always last, no matter how long the wait. i'm glad you still have such a positive attitude, knowing long distance relationships are always more difficult to bare. good poem!
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Very touching Lucie....I hope your waiting will end soon...my heart goes out to you.......

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Martie
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7 posted 11-03-1999 02:41 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

I hope you sent this poem to him, or better yet take it to him on Sunday.
poetFemmeFatale
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8 posted 11-03-1999 07:56 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

hehehe I thought you were talking Budweiser !! I thought...uh oh...she's gone off the deep end, and gone and got herself all drunk !! LMAO Sorry, I like this much better though....you should hang on to a man with a stomach like that! There aren't many of those left !! hehe I've had dreams about stomach's like that....just dreams....hehe (sigh)

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9 posted 11-03-1999 08:06 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very touching Lucie. I can feel the pain in this.

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