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Open Poetry #3

ive learned from you....

amber
Member

since 1999-06-15

Posts 240
los banos, ca,

0 posted 1999-11-03 02:24 AM

ive learned from you,

that silence often answers many questions,
when the words to speak fall behind,
every fear of never knowing,
what answers we may find.

ive learned from myself,

that im alot stronger that i used to be,
just as emotional as ive always been,
a little less tolerant in your eyes,
than i was with our mistakes then.

youve learned from me,

that the past can be forgiven,
but never forgotten in my heart,
that every pushed away memory,
can still tear me apart.

youve learned from yourself,

that loving someone unconditionally,
means looking past the fears they have,
and when i cry it kills you,
to know im hurting so bad.

weve learned together,

that being happy isnt easy,
it doesnt just flow like its supposed to,
that weve had to try so hard for this,
but it was worth it to love you.

ive learned to let go,

of my stubborness from time to time,
to let you have your victories,
even when i know im right.

youve learned to understand,

that emotions are a preciuos thing,
that cant be taken for granted,
yet cherished for what they mean.

that this love is still going,
despite everything that might have been,
your still here be side me,
my lover, my life, my best friend.

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

1 posted 1999-11-03 02:27 AM

Beautiful!

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Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

2 posted 1999-11-03 02:30 AM

Wow, amber, this is beautiful...yet sad too.
Indeed, a part always stays with us when love is lost.

Michael

amber
Member

since 1999-06-15

Posts 240
los banos, ca,

3 posted 1999-11-04 04:26 PM

thank you all so much for your comments i appreciate them very much and im glad that you took the time to read and enjoy my poetry.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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4 posted 2004-04-25 09:24 PM

oh my...how sadly beautiful

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