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Open Poetry #3

~* Falling Leaves *~

Kitty**
Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 428
Charlottesville,VA USA

0 posted 1999-11-03 12:41 PM

Falling leaves lie scattered
on the ground.
For a just season, they live and
thrive unbound.
Now they fall, without making
a sound.
And with their parting, my world
comes tumbling down.

A fall season, is when I first
met you.
And from that time on, my love
for you grew.
As the leaves begin to fall,
I felt you leaving too.
With a broken heart I watch,
there's nothing I can do.

I miss you, as I do the leaves when
they desert their trees.
Helplessly, I endure the sadness
as I grieve.
For you I yearn and through eyes
that barley sees,
from the tears I cry, as I watch
the falling leaves.

How my heart grieves, as I watch
the falling leaves....

Jennifer Marie O'Neil
Junior Member

since 1999-11-01

Posts 48
port charlotte fl/bklyn ny

1 posted 1999-11-03 03:39 AM

I really enjoyed your poem - I love the fall and leaves and all the feelings seasons recreate for me

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

2 posted 1999-11-03 11:44 AM

So sad

Well done.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 1999-11-03 11:43 PM

Very sad, Kitty. The pain in this is very clear.

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Denise

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-04-25 05:13 PM

incredible write

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