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~* Falling Leaves *~

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Kitty**
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0 posted 11-03-1999 12:41 AM       View Profile for Kitty**   Email Kitty**   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Kitty**'s Home Page   View IP for Kitty**



Falling leaves lie scattered
on the ground.
For a just season, they live and
thrive unbound.
Now they fall, without making
a sound.
And with their parting, my world
comes tumbling down.

A fall season, is when I first
met you.
And from that time on, my love
for you grew.
As the leaves begin to fall,
I felt you leaving too.
With a broken heart I watch,
there's nothing I can do.

I miss you, as I do the leaves when
they desert their trees.
Helplessly, I endure the sadness
as I grieve.
For you I yearn and through eyes
that barley sees,
from the tears I cry, as I watch
the falling leaves.

How my heart grieves, as I watch
the falling leaves....
© Copyright 1999 Kitty Sandridge - All Rights Reserved
Jennifer Marie O'Neil
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since 11-01-1999
Posts 48
port charlotte fl/bklyn ny


1 posted 11-03-1999 03:39 AM       View Profile for Jennifer Marie O'Neil   Email Jennifer Marie O'Neil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jennifer Marie O'Neil

I really enjoyed your poem - I love the fall and leaves and all the feelings seasons recreate for me
Watcher666
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2 posted 11-03-1999 11:44 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

So sad Well done.

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Denise
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3 posted 11-03-1999 11:43 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very sad, Kitty. The pain in this is very clear.

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Denise

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4 posted 04-25-2004 05:13 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

incredible write
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