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A Little "Look"...

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ThUnDeRkYsS
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since 09-23-1999
Posts 739
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0 posted 11-03-1999 12:33 AM       View Profile for ThUnDeRkYsS   Email ThUnDeRkYsS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for ThUnDeRkYsS

Goin 'bout your business
not a second thought of why
just running daily errands
lets catch lunch on the fly

Then suddenly your standing
in pure dumb-foundedness
cant remeber what your doing
cant quite see what you've missed

Soon your eyes are seeing
but no-one's home "upstairs"
you've just for one split second
realized "whats" there

And as you start to feel now
your stomach's tied in knots
breathing quickly, deeply...
"feel" in all those "funny" spots

Fear is rushing fast now
through every little vien
but you cant look away yet
it hits you like a train

Your eyes are locked to thiers still
"butterflies" are dancing fast
your heart is pounding fiercly
for air you start to gasp

Then in a flash its over
not knowing what to do
all from a glowing smile
directed right at you

Back to your day, but smiling
nice thoughts run through your mind
cant help but feel special
a place inside that "glance" will find

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Life is what you make of it... Not what you let it be
© Copyright 1999 B.J.Howe - All Rights Reserved
Watcher666
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1 posted 11-03-1999 11:49 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Sweet! Loved this one!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
ThUnDeRkYsS
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since 09-23-1999
Posts 739
Wisconsin


2 posted 11-04-1999 12:59 PM       View Profile for ThUnDeRkYsS   Email ThUnDeRkYsS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ThUnDeRkYsS

Watcher666..... Thank you, greatly appreciated

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Life is what you make of it... Not what you let it be
suthern
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on the threshold of a dream


3 posted 11-04-1999 01:12 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Hmmmm... sounds nice to be on the receiving end of one of those looks! *G*
Lynn
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since 09-20-1999
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4 posted 11-04-1999 05:19 PM       View Profile for Lynn   Email Lynn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lynn


Wonderful, Marvalous, all around great. Love the poem, and love the feeling.
passing shadows
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5 posted 04-25-2004 09:20 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

and where are you lately?
 
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