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My Beacon In the Night (a Pantoum)

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Lucie
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0 posted 11-03-1999 12:23 AM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lucie

Did you know you're my everything?
The wind that helps me fly.
When I can't count on anything.
You lift me to the sky.

The wind that helps me fly.
You help me to continue on.
You lift me to the sky.
You've made me feel like I belong.

You help me to continue on.
Although I want to quit.
You've made me feel like I belong.
A puzzle piece that fit.

Although I want to quit.
At times youíve held me while I cried.
A puzzle piece that fit.
You've touched the little girl inside.

At times youíve held me while I cried.
My beacon in the night.
You've touched the little girl inside.
You are my only light.

My beacon in the night.
When I can't count on anything.
You are my only light.
Did you know you're my everything?

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Nan wouldn't let me use the excuse that I was tired when I wrote this and she made me edit it.. hehe

[This message has been edited by Lucie (edited 11-03-1999).]
© Copyright 1999 Lucille Dobbins - All Rights Reserved
Watcher666
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1 posted 11-03-1999 01:53 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Lucie...I'm happy you've found your guiding light.May it always be so.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Michael
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2 posted 11-03-1999 02:27 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Lucie, this is so beautiful. I am so glad things are going better for you...your writing is an inspiration to all when you have a positive outlook.


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Lucie
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3 posted 11-03-1999 08:16 AM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucie

Watcher he was always there, I let my darkness dim my view. But true love always shines through.

Michael thank you so much for that comment, I am honored to be titled an inspiration by someone who writes as wonderfully as you do. Keep your chin up.
Nan
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4 posted 11-03-1999 02:34 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Lucie - You're looking a bit green around the gills - You should maybe be getting more sleep???
Isis
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5 posted 11-03-1999 06:14 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

So glad he is always there for you

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

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6 posted 11-03-1999 09:34 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Lucie, I love this! And how did you make that little green face? Soooooo cute!

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Denise

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7 posted 11-03-1999 09:53 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Lucie, I really enjoyed this one. You did a great jobe with it. Like the message behind it

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Alis volat propriis
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8 posted 11-03-1999 10:48 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Great job, Lucie! You mean Nan is a meanie, too? Thank God!
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