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Lucie
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since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077
Houston

0 posted 1999-11-03 12:23 PM


Did you know you're my everything?
The wind that helps me fly.
When I can't count on anything.
You lift me to the sky.

The wind that helps me fly.
You help me to continue on.
You lift me to the sky.
You've made me feel like I belong.

You help me to continue on.
Although I want to quit.
You've made me feel like I belong.
A puzzle piece that fit.

Although I want to quit.
At times you’ve held me while I cried.
A puzzle piece that fit.
You've touched the little girl inside.

At times you’ve held me while I cried.
My beacon in the night.
You've touched the little girl inside.
You are my only light.

My beacon in the night.
When I can't count on anything.
You are my only light.
Did you know you're my everything?

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Nan wouldn't let me use the excuse that I was tired when I wrote this and she made me edit it.. hehe

[This message has been edited by Lucie (edited 11-03-1999).]

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Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

1 posted 1999-11-03 01:53 AM


Lucie...I'm happy you've found your guiding light.May it always be so.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
2 posted 1999-11-03 02:27 AM


Lucie, this is so beautiful. I am so glad things are going better for you...your writing is an inspiration to all when you have a positive outlook.


Michael

Lucie
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since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077
Houston
3 posted 1999-11-03 08:16 AM


Watcher he was always there, I let my darkness dim my view. But true love always shines through.

Michael thank you so much for that comment, I am honored to be titled an inspiration by someone who writes as wonderfully as you do. Keep your chin up.

Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
4 posted 1999-11-03 02:34 PM


Lucie - You're looking a bit green around the gills - You should maybe be getting more sleep???
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
5 posted 1999-11-03 06:14 PM


So glad he is always there for you

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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6 posted 1999-11-03 09:34 PM


Lucie, I love this! And how did you make that little green face? Soooooo cute!

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Denise


hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
7 posted 1999-11-03 09:53 PM


Lucie, I really enjoyed this one. You did a great jobe with it. Like the message behind it

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Alis volat propriis

Balladeer
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8 posted 1999-11-03 10:48 PM


Great job, Lucie! You mean Nan is a meanie, too? Thank God!
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