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It's so hard to find my way

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Isis
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since 09-06-99
Posts 6390
Sunny Queensland


0 posted 11-02-1999 11:35 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis


I can't do it anymore,
This shroud you have entombed me with won't unwind,
I've tried my hardest - anyone can see that,
Is this all that's left behind?

All these months it's been you, you, you,
When oh when will you see beyond?
You make me feel like nothing,
Just like algae in a pond.

I can't and won't do anything more,
I've done my share and then some,
I thought things were better,
I thought we had moved on.

So this is how I feel ....
Alone and misunderstood,
Not good enough for you or any other,
All I do is bad or wrong,
Am I even a good mother?

You've shot me down so many times,
It's getting so much harder to find my way,
I'm struggling to crawl out of the primeval ooze,
Will you ever cease trying to make me pay?

I thought the man was the strong one?
Seems to me, I'm the one who has to be strong,
But I'm not, I'm only pretending,
Just struggling to get along.

Please, please be kind to me,
Be your loving self again,
I feel so alone all the time now,
I want us to be happy again.

I can't take much more,
I had even admitting it,
But this roller coaster of emotions,
Has left weakened and split.

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

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Watcher666
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since 10-13-1999
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1 posted 11-03-1999 11:55 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Pain,anger and confusion,very well expressed.....Nicely done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Marilyn
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since 09-26-1999
Posts 2646
Ontario, Canada


2 posted 11-03-1999 12:30 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

I would very much like to talk to you about this piece soul sister. I know all too well all of the emotion you discribe here. I will icq you my e-mail address and I would like you to talk to me about what is happening. Would you please do this for me?
passing shadows
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3 posted 04-25-2004 09:46 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

I can relate...I know a man like this
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