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It's so hard to find my way
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It's so hard to find my way |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland 
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I can't do it anymore, This shroud you have entombed me with won't unwind, I've tried my hardest - anyone can see that, Is this all that's left behind? All these months it's been you, you, you, When oh when will you see beyond? You make me feel like nothing, Just like algae in a pond. I can't and won't do anything more, I've done my share and then some, I thought things were better, I thought we had moved on. So this is how I feel .... Alone and misunderstood, Not good enough for you or any other, All I do is bad or wrong, Am I even a good mother? You've shot me down so many times, It's getting so much harder to find my way, I'm struggling to crawl out of the primeval ooze, Will you ever cease trying to make me pay? I thought the man was the strong one? Seems to me, I'm the one who has to be strong, But I'm not, I'm only pretending, Just struggling to get along. Please, please be kind to me, Be your loving self again, I feel so alone all the time now, I want us to be happy again. I can't take much more, I had even admitting it, But this roller coaster of emotions, Has left weakened and split. ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Pain,anger and confusion,very well expressed.....Nicely done! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
I would very much like to talk to you about this piece soul sister. I know all too well all of the emotion you discribe here. I will icq you my e-mail address and I would like you to talk to me about what is happening. Would you please do this for me? |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I can relate...I know a man like this |
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