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Kevin
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0 posted 1999-11-02 10:19 PM


in worlds where seeing is believing
I’m living lies of looks deceiving,
careful sending when receiving,
too many write after misreading.
rumors run on minds demanding,
feeding off misunderstanding.
people always in good standing
suffer in abrupt disbanding.
truth's a dangerous variation,
changes more with each creation,
everyone sees through own eyes,
and everyone lives only lies.

© Copyright 1999 Kevin Bednarz - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
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Glen Hope, PA USA
1 posted 1999-11-02 10:48 PM


Interesting rhyme scheme here
Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

2 posted 1999-11-03 01:20 AM


Liked this.....enjoyed the read!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Jennifer Marie O'Neil
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since 1999-11-01
Posts 48
port charlotte fl/bklyn ny
3 posted 1999-11-03 03:36 AM


great poem - it really made me think -
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