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Was it a dream

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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 11-02-1999 10:04 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Was it a dream

Once upon a restless sleep.
A restive thought came out the deep.
It reap behind my eyes closed numb,
And stayed within my mind to steep.

A shapeless shape of edgeless sight,
A floating specter of the night.
A forming figure standing glum,
An awesome sight of random slight.

Careless free as in oversee.
And dressed in striking grey pongee,
Sent a numb that struck me dumb
And silently come at me.

I tried so hard to speak, relate,
With open arms commiserate.
I felt my mind in warm succumb,
In haunting silent patient wait.

He waved me back in quiet mime
And whispered me it's not your time.


© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 11-02-1999 10:09 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This was absolutely chilling. What a nightmare this was....or was it? **eerie,spooky music playing in the background, and a couple of rattling chains for good measure** Most excellent, Seymour!

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Denise

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Excellent! Enjoyed this much!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 11-02-1999 11:00 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

BRAVO!!! Seymore, this was wonderful....you have a gift dear man
Nan
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4 posted 11-03-1999 08:13 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Another awesome venture, Sy....
Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 11-03-1999 08:17 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Denice,
So kind of you to read and comment on this poem. thank you so much.
Whatcher,
Glad you liked this spooky poem, thanks for the comment.
Hoot,
Bravo is a wonderful acknowledgment of this poem. I thank you much.
Pepper
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6 posted 11-03-1999 09:36 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Very chilling indeed!! Loved the read Sy........

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire!
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on the threshold of a dream


7 posted 11-03-1999 09:47 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Well done, Seymour... (shivering) *G*
Martie
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8 posted 11-03-1999 11:06 AM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

You are so good at capturing a mood Seymour. Great poem!
Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 11-03-1999 07:04 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Nan,
Nothing ventured nothing gained. *L*
Pepper,
Thank you for the read and comment.
Suthern,
Thank you for the shivering well done.
Martie,
Capturing a mood, thank you.
Sunshine
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10 posted 11-03-1999 07:14 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

You should know I dib the wierder dreams! Good one Sy, enjoyed as always!
Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 11-04-1999 12:07 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Sunshine,
Just want to thank you before this one fades away.
Isis
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12 posted 11-04-1999 01:03 AM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Another wonderful creation friend
Another word for chilling please ?

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 11-04-1999 08:30 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Isis,
Thank you so much for the read and comment.
Elizabeth
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14 posted 11-04-1999 05:33 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Ooh, spooky...

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Nail to the mast her holy flag,
Set every threadbare sail-
And give her to the god of storms,
The lightning and the gale!
-Oliver Wendell Holmes
WhtDove
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15 posted 11-04-1999 09:22 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Alright this sounds like a near death experience or something??? Well done!
Seymour Tabin
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16 posted 11-04-1999 10:04 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Lizzy,
One of my favorites, thank you.
WhtDove,
Thank you for the well done.
 
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