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Dolphins3
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since 1999-09-30
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0 posted 1999-11-02 08:56 PM


Feeling you heart beat with mine
Thinking we have for all time
Not knowing weather it will last
Or am I just looking at the past
Feeling so lost and in limbo
Just like I'm looking through a window
At someone elses life
Wanting to take the knife
Ending all the pain
Watching the blood drain
Gone with the breeze of the wind
Feeling my head begin to spin
Watching from above
My body hit the floor
To be never more........

© Copyright 1999 Cheryl Beth - All Rights Reserved
Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

1 posted 1999-11-02 09:42 PM


Thought provoking piece.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Dolphins3
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since 1999-09-30
Posts 135
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2 posted 1999-11-03 09:17 AM


Thank you Watcher.
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