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Systematic Decay
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0 posted 11-02-1999 08:46 PM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Systematic Decay

Honey
Sticks on me forever

Sugar
Sweetens bitter things

Nectar
Drawing all the bees

Candy
Melting in the sun

Syrup
I'll guard it from the ants

You will never hurt again
The sweet things you possess
Are safe with me-
Under my toungue

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.


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mia
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1 posted 11-02-1999 09:42 PM       View Profile for mia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mia

I like this...the way it comes out...simple but oh so "sweet"...

mia
Watcher666
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2 posted 11-02-1999 09:45 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Well done!!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
hoot_owl_rn
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Oh, melts in your mouth.....nice one
passing shadows
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a clever piece
 
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