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Patrick B
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since 1999-10-28
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0 posted 1999-11-02 08:21 PM


I'm going to hollywood to be a star,
My buddy said I'll go far,
I'm going to be a famous actor,
I have that important X factor,
I've seen all the films by Claude Van Damme,
Lots of muscles and tons of ham,
I'm smarter than Sly Stallone,
I can tie my laces all alone,
I have a bigger moustache than Tom Selleck,
Look better in a bikini than Bo Derek,
I'm prettier than Brad Pitt,
And he doesn't possess my quickfire wit,
I'm taller than Liam Neeson,
Can do more accents than Jackie Gleason,
I may even replace Geroge Clooney,
why did he leave ER?a total looney.
I gave a call to Patrick Swayzee,
He never called back,gee that's lazy,
My big break is getting near,
You hear me Costner?smell the fear.



[This message has been edited by Patrick B (edited 11-02-1999).]

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Watcher666
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1 posted 1999-11-02 08:32 PM


LOL....Go for it!

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Denise
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2 posted 1999-11-02 08:40 PM


This is wonderful, Patrick! Gave me a smile!

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Ohme
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since 1999-07-17
Posts 816
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3 posted 1999-11-02 08:42 PM



And send me a postcard so I Can prove I know you!!
Real cute .

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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Glen Hope, PA USA
4 posted 1999-11-02 11:07 PM


LOL....I'm going to SanDiego...does that count ?
Patrick B
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since 1999-10-28
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5 posted 1999-11-03 05:51 AM


Do I sense a few sceptics? :-)
Denise
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6 posted 1999-11-03 10:09 PM


Sceptics? Sceptics? Absolutely not!

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