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I'm going to hollywood

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Patrick B
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0 posted 11-02-1999 08:21 PM       View Profile for Patrick B   Email Patrick B   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Patrick B

I'm going to hollywood to be a star,
My buddy said I'll go far,
I'm going to be a famous actor,
I have that important X factor,
I've seen all the films by Claude Van Damme,
Lots of muscles and tons of ham,
I'm smarter than Sly Stallone,
I can tie my laces all alone,
I have a bigger moustache than Tom Selleck,
Look better in a bikini than Bo Derek,
I'm prettier than Brad Pitt,
And he doesn't possess my quickfire wit,
I'm taller than Liam Neeson,
Can do more accents than Jackie Gleason,
I may even replace Geroge Clooney,
why did he leave ER?a total looney.
I gave a call to Patrick Swayzee,
He never called back,gee that's lazy,
My big break is getting near,
You hear me Costner?smell the fear.



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Watcher666
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1 posted 11-02-1999 08:32 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

LOL....Go for it!

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Denise
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2 posted 11-02-1999 08:40 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is wonderful, Patrick! Gave me a smile!

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Denise

Ohme
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3 posted 11-02-1999 08:42 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme


And send me a postcard so I Can prove I know you!!
Real cute .
hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 11-02-1999 11:07 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

LOL....I'm going to SanDiego...does that count ?
Patrick B
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5 posted 11-03-1999 05:51 AM       View Profile for Patrick B   Email Patrick B   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Patrick B

Do I sense a few sceptics? :-)
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6 posted 11-03-1999 10:09 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Sceptics? Sceptics? Absolutely not!

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