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i have enjoyed all of your poems so much -hope you enjoy mine

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Jennifer Marie O'Neil
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port charlotte fl/bklyn ny


0 posted 11-02-1999 08:00 PM       View Profile for Jennifer Marie O'Neil   Email Jennifer Marie O'Neil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jennifer Marie O'Neil


If only you could tell me
the words I felt you feel
and I could surely know
those words I felt were real

If only I were near you
then I'd really see
just what your heart is holding
and if in there it's me

If only time could pass by
so quickly you dont recall
that I was ever away from you
or missing me at all

If only I were older
and knew who I was well
then I could give myself to you
and break free of this hell
© Copyright 1999 Jennifer Marie O'Neil - All Rights Reserved
Watcher666
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since 10-13-1999
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1 posted 11-02-1999 08:03 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Nicely done! Welcome

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Patrick B
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since 10-28-1999
Posts 58
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I liked it :-)
Systematic Decay
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since 09-15-99
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That place with padded walls a


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Very nice- I once sang this song- and then I did break free of my hell, with his help. I hope the same happens for you.

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.


WhtDove
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since 07-22-99
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Illinois


4 posted 11-06-1999 12:13 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

I enjoyed it very much! Thanks!
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