i have enjoyed all of your poems so much -hope you enjoy mine

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Open Poetry #3

i have enjoyed all of your poems so much -hope you enjoy mine

Jennifer Marie O'Neil
Junior Member

since 1999-11-01

Posts 48
port charlotte fl/bklyn ny

0 posted 1999-11-02 08:00 PM

If only you could tell me
the words I felt you feel
and I could surely know
those words I felt were real

If only I were near you
then I'd really see
just what your heart is holding
and if in there it's me

If only time could pass by
so quickly you dont recall
that I was ever away from you
or missing me at all

If only I were older
and knew who I was well
then I could give myself to you
and break free of this hell

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

1 posted 1999-11-02 08:03 PM

Nicely done! Welcome

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Patrick B
Member

since 1999-10-28

Posts 58
uk

2 posted 1999-11-02 08:23 PM

I liked it :-)

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

3 posted 1999-11-02 08:34 PM

Very nice- I once sang this song- and then I did break free of my hell, with his help. I hope the same happens for you.

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

4 posted 1999-11-06 12:13 PM

I enjoyed it very much! Thanks!

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