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Finding your rythem

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wolfie97
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0 posted 11-02-1999 07:27 PM       View Profile for wolfie97   Email wolfie97   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit wolfie97's Home Page   View IP for wolfie97


Every so often I can find a time
Where everything is so silent and
Calm when all that is heard is the
Vibration of my slowly beating Heart. That very beat is heard by Me and myselfe alone. It is not a Symphony of harmony, but a
Single,
Solitary,
Slow,
Steady,
Beat.
This steady pounding
Of this single heart
Is just a symbol of
My solitary life.

Listen to your sound, your rythem
That is unique to you and you Alone.
Just listen to your sound.
Your-
Very-
Own-
Beat-
Beat-
Beat...Beat...Beat...Beat...

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Garrett 'sneaky' Gall
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Watcher666
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since 10-13-1999
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1 posted 11-02-1999 08:01 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Liked this much.Well done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Systematic Decay
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2 posted 11-02-1999 08:41 PM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

Well, this could use some work....the end drags on too much...but I liked the message, so back to the top it goes!

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.


Ohme
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3 posted 11-02-1999 08:49 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme

I think it's cute. Don't know what to make of the palpatations on the last line. But as I said. Cute, love it.
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