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Watcher666
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0 posted 11-02-1999 06:46 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Smoky, musky sweet perfume
Help me survive this lonely gloom
Slim coated glistening walls
Lonely voices echoes in the halls

Entrapped in Darkness' tight embrace
This mortal coil does through race
Awaiting death at every door
Fire licking every pore

Shadows hide the truth inside
Where Dragons heart did reside
Alone and lonelier by far
Sometimes wishing on a star

Multiple hues of black and red
Flank the trail of the dead
Playing games upon my head
Following to where I'll be lead

At cemeteries gate the path ends
After many perilous twists and bends
Here lay the dead in repose
So told the tale of each of those

Marble stones at every turn
Hell's flames do brightly burn
Skin scorched, And soul torn
Ah, plight of the forlorn




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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
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Severn
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1 posted 11-02-1999 06:49 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Very expressive - sure know that mood.
Great work, Watcher.
Pepper
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2 posted 11-02-1999 07:22 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Enjoyed this much Watcher.....

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RobertB
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3 posted 11-02-1999 07:36 PM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RobertB

Like it!! hmmm..I have a poem about folorned or something...I'll look it up and post

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Systematic Decay
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4 posted 11-02-1999 08:05 PM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

Wonderful, as usual

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.


Denise
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5 posted 11-02-1999 08:08 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

A real mood poem. Very good.

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Denise

Kevin
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6 posted 11-02-1999 08:09 PM       View Profile for Kevin   Email Kevin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kevin

your always there to compliment me so heres your kudos back

great work man
fire licking every pore =)
love that
Patrick B
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7 posted 11-02-1999 08:26 PM       View Profile for Patrick B   Email Patrick B   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Patrick B

very familiar sentiments and feelings
Watcher666
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8 posted 11-02-1999 09:43 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Thank-You all for reading.I appreciate your comments!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Isis
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9 posted 11-02-1999 10:19 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Such good descriptions for when you feel like that!! Top stuff!

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hoot_owl_rn
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10 posted 11-02-1999 10:47 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Very nice read here watcher, thanks for posting
ThUnDeRkYsS
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11 posted 11-02-1999 11:13 PM       View Profile for ThUnDeRkYsS   Email ThUnDeRkYsS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ThUnDeRkYsS

Very well written and expressed, Watcher! I know the mood too well also, my friend. Great visual expressiveness as well

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Life is what you make of it... Not what you let it be
russelle
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12 posted 11-02-1999 11:18 PM       View Profile for russelle   Email russelle   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for russelle

loved the imagery, great read
Iloveit
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13 posted 11-03-1999 10:46 AM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

watcher, enjoyed this much, sigh, have felt this emotion too many times
Martie
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14 posted 11-03-1999 10:59 AM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Excellent!
 
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