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What I Felt

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Michael
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0 posted 11-02-1999 05:43 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Michael

Am I to cast all my friends aside,
That you may see my love true?
You cast me off as if I have died,
I wonder, is this my due?

You speak contempt, dashing all hope,
Scorning the love I share.
Leave me on the outside to cope,
I wonder, is that fair?

Am I to wait here, all alone,
Never knowing what was my wrong?
Yesterday you held me to your throne,
Now, where do I belong?

You turn your head and walk away,
Without even a goodbye.
Was I not worth time it would take to say,
Or could you not look me in the eye?

Do I not deserve a word in this,
Or would it just hang on your guilt?
If so, be this my good-bye kiss,
"I only spoke what I felt."




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Michael Anderson

And after-drunkeness of soul
Succeeds the glory of the bowl -
An idle longing night and day
To dream my very life away


EAP

© Copyright 1999 Michael Anderson - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 11-02-1999 05:53 PM       View Profile for Kevin   Email Kevin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kevin

only been here a day or two, but you seem to be the cream of the crop micheal

nice poem
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2 posted 11-02-1999 05:54 PM       View Profile for Kevin   Email Kevin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kevin

michael even
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3 posted 11-02-1999 05:59 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Uh Oh! Sounds upsetting! Hope things get better. Well done in the expression of your feelings!
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4 posted 11-02-1999 06:00 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Your pain and confusion are well felt in this one my friend.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
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5 posted 11-02-1999 08:54 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I'm sorry for your pain. You have expressed it very well. Hope your skys are sunny again real soon.

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Denise

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6 posted 11-02-1999 10:30 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Oh Michael like Watcher said your pain and confusion come through so strongly.
Hope it's not as bad as you described. Sorry for you too (HUGS)

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~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

Corinne
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7 posted 11-02-1999 10:41 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

It helps to write emotions out on paper, doesn't it? Sort of like an excorcism to me...Then I can begin to leave them lie there, instead of being inside of me.

And it is sad when someone so important in our lives suddenly treats us, or we treat them as though they never existed.

Well done
Corinne
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So sad Michael My thoughts and prayers are with you
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9 posted 11-03-1999 10:24 AM       View Profile for Richard 33   Email Richard 33   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Richard 33

Michael

I don't know exactly what to say, you more
than anyone knows the hurt she has been through, maybe she got scared, all of the sudden, ya know it can happen, when a persons
mind goes off in a direction unchecked, we all think some strange, if not scary things,
I call them the what ifs, and they are very real, my friend, Please try not to be angry
at Gennifer, when frightened poeple can do
some drastic things without any warning!!!!


If you need to talk to someone you can email
me, or you can reach me on Instant messenger
at cordaddy33, Michael just hang in there!!!


Richard
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10 posted 11-03-1999 10:36 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Michael: HUSG

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

Marilyn
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11 posted 11-03-1999 12:48 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

i have watched as you have flown with exhilleration, then crashed with pain. I know that these are real emotions and human. My question is this. (for both you and pFF) Is it healthy for a relationship to do this to the individuals involved?

I am saying nothing about you or pFF because I do not know the two of you intimately. My question is from a person outside, looking in. What both pFF and you have to do is take some time and evaluate the situation. Step back from the emotions and think with a clear head.

Sometimes we get so lost in the feeling, we loose our perspective. Just a thought...please do not be angry with me for these comments.
Michael
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12 posted 11-03-1999 01:03 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Marilyn, writing is a form of therapy for me. I am a chronically depressed individual who would be writng just as gut wrenching of pieces whether or not they were directed to Gennifer or not. I can assure you and everyone else who might question mine and Gennifer's relationship that I am a much better and much "healthier" person for having her in my life. The stress of a long distance relationship can take its toll and lead to miscommunications at times, but Femme and I, both realize our weaknesses, and place our relationship in the hands of God. Never doubt that she is a blessing to me.


Michael

[This message has been edited by Michael (edited 11-03-1999).]
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13 posted 11-03-1999 01:11 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Very very well said, Michael....couldn't have done it better myself...hehe

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~~ Lift your head high - spread your "words" and fly - - poetFemmeFatale

Sunshine
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14 posted 11-03-1999 02:20 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Your writing speaks volumes. Keep it up, the catharsis is good.
Marilyn
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15 posted 11-03-1999 04:51 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

Thankyou for adressing my comment Michael. I wasn't trying to be mean spirited in any way. As I stated I do not know you or Gennifer personally. I am very glad that both of you approach this in a health way. My hopes are with both of you (as they always have been).
 
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