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when you no longer feel anything..

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The Jackal
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0 posted 11-02-1999 02:24 PM       View Profile for The Jackal   Email The Jackal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Jackal

i was wasted
lost among the snow
and she was something
that still affects me somehow
i enjoy being the plaything..
find this all amusing
want to hear my story..
it plays out all right
pain pain..i could just eat away my brain
for i havent the courage to run away
i had one night
more than i ever could be allowed
now im being constanly swallowed
its so damn fun..its so damn real
please do join me..
tied and thrashed to this wheel
id rather be dead than lonely
so stone me like you want too..
i wont even feel a thing
ive lost that power
ive lost that soul
that helps me stay..
i dont wish to go




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Watcher666
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since 10-13-1999
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1 posted 11-02-1999 03:16 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Enjoyed the read.Nicely done.

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Nice read Jackal
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