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All Or Nothing?
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All Or Nothing? |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA 
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All Or Nothing? Give me all or nothing you said; all of you to me or give me nothing at all. So, I gave you all of my heart, all of my being, all of my love, everything I could. Then you threw it all away and left me with nothing. ------------------ Alis volat propriis [This message has been edited by hoot_owl_rn (edited 11-02-1999).] |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
yep, makes you understand the "holding back" part of a relationship.....sigh, good writing  |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Hoot makes me think of the old saying "Better to have loved and lost then to have never lovd at all" Mistakes only exist if we have not learned from them.. |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
Very nicely done, Hoot. And of course you know why we do it. It's that 'All' we expect in return that gets us. ------------------ I look forward to tomorrow, while looking back on the past. But today is the day I am living. And I expect it to be a great day! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Good one Hoot! Sad ending. Though it certainly seems just as you write. We give all of us, and end up with nothing! Well said my friend! HUGS |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
So true ...so sad  ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Thank you everyone, just my mood today, depressing I guess. Tomorrow is yet another day |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
hugs, Ruth. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Sad and well stated...Hoot, is it this week when you and Tyson meet? ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire! |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Very nice work Ruth. Heartfelt and cause we've all been there, you're not alone ------------------ Life is what you make of it... Not what you let it be |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Thanks Thunder and severn Pepper, yes, Thursday, not the reason behind my depression for sure, I am very nervous though. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very sad ....but soon you'll be smiling Geeeesh....I'm nervous too, and I'm not even going to California! Hope everything goes well and surpasses your wildest expectations! ------------------ Denise |
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spoongirl28 Junior Member
since 1999-10-24
Posts 27FWB, FL USA |
This feels very familiar to me...I've also given my heart and had it tossed away...very well done hoot! ------------------ Spoongirl28 |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I too know this feeling Hoot, whoever it was written about, it was there loss. Just hold onto that thought! (HUGS)------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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