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handbagsatfiftypaces
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0 posted 11-02-1999 08:21 AM       View Profile for handbagsatfiftypaces   Email handbagsatfiftypaces   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for handbagsatfiftypaces

always wanted to be
in control.

nothing new that day, but
something grew that day,
i felt it turn and twist and grab for more
it's tiny hands rakingthrough my jealous thoughts and crying out for more

my sickness, my distress, my watering eyes ad swelling breasts
it hurt so much to set you free

in a mad panic you
conquered me

and smashed me,
like a crystal womb inside the belly of the earth
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hoot_owl_rn
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That last line is a winner...welcome to passions
handbagsatfiftypaces
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2 posted 11-02-1999 09:54 AM       View Profile for handbagsatfiftypaces   Email handbagsatfiftypaces   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for handbagsatfiftypaces

thankyou, hoot. i need all the encouragement i can get at the moment
Watcher666
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Nicely done.Enjoyed the read!

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