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The Change of Time
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The Change of Time |
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Sunshine
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The Change of Time Mother Nature certainly has it right and all her creations heartily agree so why is it humans change with force the Time, and subject it on you and me? Now I’m up before I’m ready willing spirit, but legs unsteady; when tonight I’ll fall apart at eight be in bed by nine, can you relate? I’d rather our own bodies’ clocks follow the natural rhythm it brings, and I would take it to the bank with you it would absolve insanity, and other things. Eating schedules are off, just ask the cows who get milked one hour later, and how their bags must ache for lack of release, for if they could talk, they would say PLEASE... Follow Nature’s natural walk through life, end human suffering, and some strife, and go to bed with the stars and moon as we do quit trying to save time, you’re saving it for who? ©KRJ 2 November 1999 ------------------ Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Instead of being ten minutes late all of the time, I am now fifty minutes early. So it isnt all bad. Enjoyed the poem. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, From the cows point of view, I guess your right. I enjoyed the read. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Enjoyed the read Sunshine.....awwww...poor cows..lol ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire! |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
yes, well, what else can you expect in the early hours...??? LOL! Mike, thanks for reading. Sy - trust me on this one! Pepper, thanks for coming in! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Well done, Sunshine... and cows aren't the only ones with schedules... my kitties now wake me an hour before the alarm clock... it's breakfast time for their tummies no matter what the clock says! LOL |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Makes no sense to me either.Luckily my dogs sleep as long as I do!  ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
suthern, animals are NOT fooled! watcher, at least two of us think alike! |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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Wonderful poem, Sunshine! My feelings exactly! But, alas, if I were to follow my natural clock, I'd sleep every day 'till...oh...about 9 or 10 and get to work around...oh...12 or 1 and be ready to go home by around...oh....3 or 4!! 'Twould simply be paradise! At least for me!  Again, great poem!------------------ Denise |
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Sunshine
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And I bet, denise, you would get even more work done! Thanks for coming in! |
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