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Michael
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0 posted 1999-11-02 03:53 AM


Very few are the people who can always make you smile.
The ones who, no matter what, seem to make it all worthwhile.
When God sends down an Angel, indeed, one should praise that day,
Cause not much is left as an Angel flies away.

You thought she'd always be there as she had been for so long.
Her words were softly spoken but her emotion, so strong.
Her caring was so evident in every last word she'd say,
But who's left to care as an Angel flies away?

Her friendship is a treasure, one that I will ever trust.
But her tears are my reminder that Time turns all to dust.
Standing here, in what was her home, leaves me in disarray.
Cause all I can do is cry as our Angel flies away.


Heather, you will be greatly missed.

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Michael Anderson



[This message has been edited by Michael (edited 11-02-1999).]

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DreamEvil
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1 posted 1999-11-02 03:58 AM


My heart breaks with the reading of this and with the thought of your penning it my friend.

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Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©


Watcher666
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2 posted 1999-11-02 04:49 AM


Very Beautiful.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Dark Angel
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3 posted 1999-11-02 06:28 AM


This is beautiful Michael, yet very sad.

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



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4 posted 1999-11-02 07:34 AM


Very beautiful, Michael... and very sad.
WhtDove
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5 posted 1999-11-02 08:13 AM


Simply a beautiful treasure my friend! Well spoken!
Mike
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6 posted 1999-11-02 08:17 AM


Well done (of course)

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 1999-11-02 08:20 AM


Michael,
Well you broke my heart too and that's not easy to do. A wonderful poem.

JennyLee
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8 posted 1999-11-02 08:53 AM


So beautiful.

Jenny

hoot_owl_rn
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9 posted 1999-11-02 09:12 AM


This is so sad Michael
poetFemmeFatale
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10 posted 1999-11-02 09:18 AM


My heart too cries...for I know how much she means to you. This is beautiful Michael, I know she will love it....

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~~ Lift your head high - spread your "words" and fly - - poetFemmeFatale


Pepper
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11 posted 1999-11-02 09:19 AM


So beautiful, so sad......

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire!

RainbowGirl
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12 posted 1999-11-02 09:20 AM


Beautiful Michael..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


Iloveit
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13 posted 1999-11-02 09:39 AM


well its been said before, but let me add mine too, beautiful but sad, really nice work Michael
Blackdrake
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14 posted 1999-11-02 10:37 AM


This is beautiful Michael. My heart weep's for your loss.

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Thy own Darkness shall conquer the Light

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