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Together; (or,For she who never was)

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For_Never
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since 10-27-1999
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0 posted 11-02-1999 02:29 AM       View Profile for For_Never   Email For_Never   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for For_Never

Knowing why, doens't bring how,
and I need all I can
When it blows through me
you will know...
I will hold you down,
tell you all.. kiss those tears..
Embrace your fears
I will embody the love,
and you the strength..
..and place my lips upon yours..
breathing together..
forgetting the apart..
Loving you..
loving me..
Obsession burning
I need you, more than the air I have
all I need is that precious touch..
strumming my heart,
gently plucking my soul..
The music it plays will take me there,
and I will you bring..
Souls intwined
spirits embaced
bodies together
Where you an I ..


...Make one...


Edward A. Beerman
8-97

If shes out there, she must be beyond my means,But if shes out there remains to be seen...
© Copyright 1999 Edward A. Beerman - All Rights Reserved
Watcher666
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1 posted 11-02-1999 02:34 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Awww.....so beautiful!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
X Angel
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2 posted 11-07-1999 09:09 PM       View Profile for X Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for X Angel

This had an intensity about it. I imagine you wrote it straight from experience. I liked this muchly
X

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"We have loved the stars too fondly to be fearful of the night" (Tombstone epitaph of two amateur astronomers)
Pepper
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3 posted 11-07-1999 09:24 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

I can feel the passion that this was written with......
Well Done and very beautiful Edward...

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!

Denise
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4 posted 11-07-1999 10:41 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Yes, this is very beautiful! I enjoyed this very much.

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Denise

Kevin
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5 posted 11-07-1999 10:49 PM       View Profile for Kevin   Email Kevin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kevin

this was beautiful man
and it didnt rhyme heheheheheh
great job i want more!
Isis
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6 posted 11-07-1999 11:56 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Beautiful, longing piece Edward. You will find her, she IS out there my friend..

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

passing shadows
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7 posted 04-25-2004 08:33 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

a beautiful write
Kitttheory
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8 posted 11-11-2005 11:41 AM       View Profile for Kitttheory   Email Kitttheory   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Kitttheory

Edd, I remember this poem. I carried it with me for years. I don't want to sleep till I hear your voice again.
I love you
 
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