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Together; (or,For she who never was)
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For_Never Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 125Cincinnati, oh, United States of America |
Knowing why, doens't bring how, and I need all I can When it blows through me you will know... I will hold you down, tell you all.. kiss those tears.. Embrace your fears I will embody the love, and you the strength.. ..and place my lips upon yours.. breathing together.. forgetting the apart.. Loving you.. loving me.. Obsession burning I need you, more than the air I have all I need is that precious touch.. strumming my heart, gently plucking my soul.. The music it plays will take me there, and I will you bring.. Souls intwined spirits embaced bodies together Where you an I .. ...Make one... Edward A. Beerman 8-97 If shes out there, she must be beyond my means,But if shes out there remains to be seen... |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Awww.....so beautiful! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
This had an intensity about it. I imagine you wrote it straight from experience. I liked this muchly  X ------------------ "We have loved the stars too fondly to be fearful of the night" (Tombstone epitaph of two amateur astronomers) |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
I can feel the passion that this was written with...... Well Done and very beautiful Edward... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yes, this is very beautiful! I enjoyed this very much. ------------------ Denise |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
this was beautiful man and it didnt rhyme heheheheheh great job i want more! |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Beautiful, longing piece Edward. You will find her, she IS out there my friend.. ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a beautiful write |
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Kitttheory New Member
since 2005-11-11
Posts 4Washington,US |
Edd, I remember this poem. I carried it with me for years. I don't want to sleep till I hear your voice again. I love you |
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