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Peace

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For_Never
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0 posted 11-02-1999 02:03 AM       View Profile for For_Never   Email For_Never   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for For_Never

Then the gate opened
and the rage most savage flooded in
a hatred that burns so fierce,
quickly flees
and the insanity leaves
abandoning you lipid and weak

I am left alone,
silence holds
I am half the man I used to be..
and more than I ever was before...

When feeling are frayed,
hurting and depraved..
and reigning is pain
no anger shall long remains..

Love lost is haboring those
...and love began the end...
All hate is gone,
once I begin


Searching anew, hope will not rise
repressed thoughts drift in my mind..
Will I find love,
before my heart dies?

Will almost gone
Soul lost inside
passion almost spent..
The love I needed was never sent..

Edward A. Beerman
11-2-99

(sorry about the romance novel feel)
© Copyright 1999 Edward A. Beerman - All Rights Reserved
Watcher666
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1 posted 11-02-1999 02:17 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Sad and beautiful at once.Well done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
For_Never
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2 posted 11-02-1999 09:35 PM       View Profile for For_Never   Email For_Never   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for For_Never

Well,thank you watcher666, I am glad you enjoyed it.

EAB
 
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