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For_Never
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since 1999-10-27
Posts 125
Cincinnati, oh, United States of America

0 posted 1999-11-02 02:03 AM


Then the gate opened
and the rage most savage flooded in
a hatred that burns so fierce,
quickly flees
and the insanity leaves
abandoning you lipid and weak

I am left alone,
silence holds
I am half the man I used to be..
and more than I ever was before...

When feeling are frayed,
hurting and depraved..
and reigning is pain
no anger shall long remains..

Love lost is haboring those
...and love began the end...
All hate is gone,
once I begin


Searching anew, hope will not rise
repressed thoughts drift in my mind..
Will I find love,
before my heart dies?

Will almost gone
Soul lost inside
passion almost spent..
The love I needed was never sent..

Edward A. Beerman
11-2-99

(sorry about the romance novel feel)

© Copyright 1999 Edward A. Beerman - All Rights Reserved
Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

1 posted 1999-11-02 02:17 AM


Sad and beautiful at once.Well done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

For_Never
Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 125
Cincinnati, oh, United States of America
2 posted 1999-11-02 09:35 PM


Well,thank you watcher666, I am glad you enjoyed it.

EAB

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