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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa 
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so much insecurity living with uncertainty no cure for the hurt in me it seems the story goes searching for a life complete the first sweet time our eyes did meet heart that simply could not beat how beautifully time froze. now every time you glance my way I dream of another day starlit skies beneath we lay in love as heaven sent. then in time again apart somberness of lonely heart dreams do end when real does start no longer truth is bent. |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
just had to get rid of that 0, its pretty painful |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Well done! Liked this much! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I liked this...interesting rhyme scheme and format you used here, it works well  |
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