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Kevin
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0 posted 11-02-1999 01:36 AM       View Profile for Kevin   Email Kevin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Kevin

so much insecurity
living with uncertainty
no cure for the hurt in me
it seems the story goes
searching for a life complete
the first sweet time our eyes did meet
heart that simply could not beat
how beautifully time froze.
now every time you glance my way
I dream of another day
starlit skies beneath we lay
in love as heaven sent.
then in time again apart
somberness of lonely heart
dreams do end when real does start
no longer truth is bent.
© Copyright 1999 Kevin Bednarz - All Rights Reserved
Kevin
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1 posted 11-02-1999 01:48 AM       View Profile for Kevin   Email Kevin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kevin

just had to get rid of that 0, its pretty painful
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Well done! Liked this much!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
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I liked this...interesting rhyme scheme and format you used here, it works well
 
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