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my first forum poem (indecision)
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my first forum poem (indecision) |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa 
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Time stops, eternity begins, a life to live or lose with you. I watch and wait, can only dream, I wonder if you only knew. Torn between an ageless question, resting where the road does part. Slowly fading, always thinking, who to trust my mind? my heart? Emotions conquer every moment, think I’m ready, know I’m not, One step forward two steps back, only moving forward in thought. Will you love me can I love you? only indecision knows, In my heart and hesitation love for you can only grow. ------------------ love hurts |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Well done!! Welcome!  ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very nicely done Kevin...another welcome to passions |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
What a marvelous start to what I hope becomes the first of many posts. |
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U K Hero Member
since 1999-08-08
Posts 266England |
yes I agree Love does hurt, every time. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Glad to see your post, hope to see more from you!  [This message has been edited by WhtDove (edited 11-02-1999).] |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
thank you all for your responses, im so happy i finally found a forum with so many good people, where i can showcase and view other works! this is great! |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
I too offer a warm welcome to Passions. I really enjoyed this piece. I know all too well the feelings discribed here. |
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