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my first forum poem (indecision)

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Kevin
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0 posted 11-02-1999 01:22 AM       View Profile for Kevin   Email Kevin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Kevin

Time stops, eternity begins, a life to live or lose with you.
I watch and wait, can only dream, I wonder if you only knew.
Torn between an ageless question, resting where the road does part.
Slowly fading, always thinking, who to trust my mind? my heart?
Emotions conquer every moment, think Iím ready, know Iím not,
One step forward two steps back, only moving forward in thought.
Will you love me can I love you? only indecision knows,
In my heart and hesitation love for you can only grow.


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love hurts
© Copyright 1999 Kevin Bednarz - All Rights Reserved
Watcher666
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1 posted 11-02-1999 01:24 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Well done!! Welcome!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 11-02-1999 09:47 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Very nicely done Kevin...another welcome to passions
Lucie
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3 posted 11-02-1999 10:15 AM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucie

What a marvelous start to what I hope becomes the first of many posts.
U K Hero
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4 posted 11-02-1999 10:25 AM       View Profile for U K Hero   Email U K Hero   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for U K Hero

yes I agree Love does hurt, every time.
WhtDove
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5 posted 11-02-1999 10:34 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Glad to see your post, hope to see more from you!





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Kevin
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6 posted 11-02-1999 02:41 PM       View Profile for Kevin   Email Kevin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kevin

thank you all for your responses,
im so happy i finally found a forum with so many good people, where i can showcase and view other works! this is great!
Marilyn
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7 posted 11-02-1999 02:55 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

I too offer a warm welcome to Passions. I really enjoyed this piece. I know all too well the feelings discribed here.
 
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